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Follow Me

Follow me into the cave In the dark that we both crave The echoes come back at us Like haunting cries we mistrust Follow me into the ocean Where the water feeds our emotion So we can show our devotion Call my name and I will follow Look at me and I will swallow Like the heavy mountain air I get breathless when you stare Follow me and I will show you The sky’s hues the different colors show you all the watercolors Bring them down, give them to you each and every deepest blue Let you sink into me So you can feel my sincerity I will follow you anywhere Because I love the way you care Twirl my fingers through your hair In your mind I love to share Words they follow us around When you sing I love that sound Like following the great Devine For this feeling I can’t define Follow me all of our days Stumble over the words I try to say I’ll show you all I portray The hidden maze inside myself The old dust that’s on my shelf Just hold my hand and I will follow Sit with me so I won’t feel hollow I’ll send you a message this way For the love I want to display But these words I’m scared to say

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Date: 9/25/2023 7:24:00 PM
A beautifully composed piece, Jenna:-) I loved it. Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 9/24/2023 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jenna! :)
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Date: 9/16/2023 6:02:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/14/2023 5:32:00 AM
This is a very touching love poem. Enjoyed it this am with my coffee. Thank you so much for writing it and God bless you and your special love.
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