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FOGGY GHOSTS
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swings creak, ghosts of laughter
clinging to their chains.
fog swallows the slide whole~
a tongue tasting absence.
monkey bars stretch like ribs
of some half-remembered animal.
kicked pebbles roll, then pause,
listening for their own echo.
a crow lands, tilts its head,
claiming the silence as its own.
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