Edward Ibeh Poet Haiku

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Foggy Daybreak

daybreak wide awake

   wrapped in misty fog blanket ~

above hangs rainbow  


H Forms - Traditional Nature Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France
Date written: 03/03/2022

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Constance La France March 8, 2022 at 8:31 AM Edward, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku contest with your wonderful poem, I like your image also ~Constance

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2022 at 11:45 AM a beautiful picture you have painted, Edward . Congrats. Edward Ibeh March 6, 2022 at 2:06 PM Thank you very much indeed, Andrea:-)

Vijay Pandit March 4, 2022 at 4:25 AM Each line a dawning image --the ending line a lovely rainbow. Edward Ibeh March 4, 2022 at 5:06 AM Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

Laura Leiser March 3, 2022 at 6:03 PM Very well written nature haiku, Edward. It flows well with an even balance of nature and imagery. You set the stage for that moment in time..good luck in the contest! :) Edward Ibeh March 3, 2022 at 7:23 PM Thank you very much for the feedback and visit, Laura:-)