Foggy Daybreak

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daybreak wide awake wrapped in misty fog blanket ~ above hangs rainbow H Forms - Traditional Nature Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Date written: 03/03/2022

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Constance La France

Date: 3/8/2022 8:31:00 AM

Edward, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku contest with your wonderful poem, I like your image also ~Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2022 11:45:00 AM

a beautiful picture you have painted, Edward . Congrats.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/6/2022 2:06:00 PM

Thank you very much indeed, Andrea:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/4/2022 4:25:00 AM

Each line a dawning image --the ending line a lovely rainbow.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/4/2022 5:06:00 AM

Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/3/2022 6:03:00 PM

Very well written nature haiku, Edward. It flows well with an even balance of nature and imagery. You set the stage for that moment in time..good luck in the contest! :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/3/2022 7:23:00 PM

Thank you very much for the feedback and visit, Laura:-)