Foggy Arc

this mystic arc above the bridge fogged rims from river’s edge alluring eyes to wind down the fragmented edges and plunge upon its icy depths my eyes cast off like shadows towards an ashen sky instead (Bus scribbles)

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/11/2019 8:04:00 AM

One could only imagine what kind of poetry would you have created if only you were sitting in your office writing and not just scribbling in a bus! Marvelous! Hugs xxx

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/11/2019 10:00:00 AM

What a kind thing to say Demetrios...i love when nature inspires little scribbles out of me...being in an office with access to a computer would definitely inspire much more writing, as i would have more time...not to mention it is hard to write on my phone to post the scribbles... have a great day... hugs :)

Jeff Connelly

Date: 12/10/2019 9:04:00 PM

Scribbling is a wonderful thing Sandra, as is this poem. Thank you.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/11/2019 9:45:00 AM

Thank you so much Jeff...sometimes scribbles keep the muse in the mood to sing... hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/10/2019 6:53:00 PM

It sounds like your eyes are enchanted. Hugs Rick.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 8:05:00 PM

This was the most unique thing i had ever seen.. the way the fog lifted above the river forming an arc across the bridge...i did think as i was going under it and looking at the river and all the ice chunks and fog that it was a relief that i was not going to have to cross the bridge again once i had the kids on board... hugs :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/10/2019 6:00:00 PM

Bus scribbles -- mighty fine! Looking forward to the next edition now... or perhaps bus doodles. (Scribble them in Massachusetts and call them Yankee Doodles). Smiles, Gershon

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 6:44:00 PM

Thank you my friend.... might be too cold for my liking up that way...but your comment did make me laugh...lol :) hugs

Brenda Chiri

Date: 12/10/2019 5:30:00 PM

Bus scribbles? Lol girl is this your thoughts while you drive? Would love to spend a day in your mind your writing is amazing!;)

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 6:42:00 PM

Thank you Brenda, i see things when driving or sitting empty, when i am empty and parked i try to paint a picture of what i see...lots of beauty in nature if we look for it... :) hugs

Running Wolves

Date: 12/10/2019 4:11:00 PM

Nice scribbles, I want the number of that bus...lol

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 6:40:00 PM

Thank you...lol...i have no set number...i sub and drive many of them... :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/10/2019 3:42:00 PM

An ashen sky day here in Maryland as well today--excellent imagery in tones of shadows--brilliantly expressed, Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 6:40:00 PM

Thank you Vijay...are you expecting snow overnight and into tomorrow too? this rain has been awful but snow is supposed to be coming... hugs

John Gondolf

Date: 12/10/2019 3:32:00 PM

I hope you are not typing these "bus scribbles" as you drive, Sandy. Nicely penned. Hugs, John

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 3:42:00 PM

Never. For one it’s against the law for two I adore my precious cargo way to much and am a very cautious driver I do however sit empty waiting sometimes up to an hour for pick up time which can get boring in a bus alone :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/10/2019 3:10:00 PM

Wow, your scribbles are a work of art, Sandra!

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 6:39:00 PM

Thank you so much Michelle...mother nature was the true artist here, i just tried to share what i saw, i had never seen anything like it before... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 12/10/2019 2:46:00 PM

The scene, cold and dreary, damp and foggy, nature painting with a wintry brush sounds so much more beautiful when described by your pen my friend. Simply divine.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 6:37:00 PM

Thank you so much Chris...it was an amazing thing to see, the way the fog lifted off both sides of the river and came up over the bridge forming an arc above it...something i have never seen before and wanted to share... hugs

Na Na

Date: 12/10/2019 2:44:00 PM

well done Sandra at first I thought you was near a volcano then I read it again :) Thanks for sharing

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 6:36:00 PM

it truly was an amazing sight to behold...of course i had to wait until i was parked again to try and put it to words :) hugs