Fogging Up the Windows

Assuming we're both heading to Heaven When our days here on earth are done Please save me a seat beside you dear lover To continue with more naughty fun Not suggesting anything out of line Just some normal naughtiness, you know Like the times we had in the back seat of my Chevy What a blast... you sure put on a show Taught me things I only read about in books Young and inexperienced was I You showed me stuff that boggled my mind On your knowhow I had to rely Don't think I've ever thanked you enough Here's how I intend to repay Promise to make love for eternity or longer Believe these words that I say Remembering how we were obsessed with sex You were the absolute bestest by far The downside was, it always seemed like night Kept fogging up the windows of the car © Jack Ellison 2014
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Date: 3/4/2014 9:03:00 AM
HaH! You should be in a van with Dragon when we take him any where in the winter! Talking about foggy windows! Well, at least his flame also makes for a great defroster... Tho a few have been known to melt! Now... That's a sticky wicket... LOL And rather expensive!... But you show see the eyes bug out on the glass repairmen... when they see it! A picture is worth a thousand words! Really! Tho I always feel... They deserve a tip after all that extra work! With dragon it's NEVER dull!... LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/4/2014 9:35:00 AM
Never thought about that! Dragon does cause some problems eh... but he's worth it, right! LOL XOX
Date: 3/4/2014 8:24:00 AM
Cars nowadays are to small. You grew up in the age of drive in movies and look out point, you lucky dog.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/4/2014 9:32:00 AM
Those drivable huge boats with those bed-like back seats! Oh yeah!!!
Date: 3/4/2014 7:33:00 AM
so titillating lines...it tickles my bones ,Jack! ..superb emotion in every lines... !!! ..i love it!! ..^__^
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/4/2014 9:30:00 AM
I'm living proof! LOL
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/4/2014 8:04:00 AM
i think the only thing that does not expires ...is naughtiness.. lol! ....^_6
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/4/2014 7:41:00 AM
Whatta naughty man... and at my age? Shame, shame, shame! LOL Loving hugs, Jacko XOXOX
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