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Fog Rolling In

~~ FOG ROLLING IN ~~

A Poem by Debbie_Philly 

Fog's Rolling In
 
Fog is rolling in , man is it creepy half a block from the beach
It's 11:30 pm guess tomorrow will be humid
Looks like fog anyway could be the twisted tea's
clouding my vision and I'm laughing to myself cause
I just don't give a ****
As I'm sitting on the balcony overlooking the Atlantic.
Fog is rolling in it's creepy yet mesmerizing at the same time
kind of like my old boyfriends
Till then I'll just pray the sea creatures stay in THAT direction.
 
By: Debbie Kelly
 
I wrote this while down the shore

Copyright © Debbie Mills-Kelly | Year Posted 2014

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Erica Kishpaugh Date: 3/11/2014 7:35:00 AM Hahaha!!! ""creepy yet mesmerizing .... kind of like my old boyfriends!!"" Too funny Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 2/5/2014 3:01:00 PM This site censored a word in one of my more recent submissions not too long ago. I didn't think it was a bad word. Your write reminds me of the years I lived in Ventnor and Margate. Login to Reply Debbie Mills-Kelly Date: 2/8/2014 8:32:00 PM Hey Robert.... Thanks for reading :) Yes I was in Wildwood at the time.. the Crest in Oct...I never really get down there much anymore... but I do love it... :) Thanks again Robert !!

Chris Boskovski Date: 2/4/2014 7:49:00 PM Oh I like it, a lady not afraid to use her manlier vocabulary. lol Nice one, I can picture the fog rolling in now! great poem. :) xoxo Login to Reply Debbie Mills-Kelly Date: 2/5/2014 1:36:00 PM LOL Thank you.,... I was just goofing off down the shore... Thank you Chris !! :)

Agnes Bugeja Date: 2/4/2014 12:51:00 AM Debbie I can so picture this....thank you for sharing Login to Reply Debbie Mills-Kelly Date: 2/4/2014 1:04:00 AM Thank you so much :)