Debbie Mills-Kelly Poet Light Verse

Fog Rolling In

~~ FOG ROLLING IN ~~

A Poem by Debbie_Philly 

Fog's Rolling In
 
Fog is rolling in , man is it creepy half a block from the beach
It's 11:30 pm guess tomorrow will be humid
Looks like fog anyway could be the twisted tea's
clouding my vision and I'm laughing to myself cause
I just don't give a ****
As I'm sitting on the balcony overlooking the Atlantic.
Fog is rolling in it's creepy yet mesmerizing at the same time
kind of like my old boyfriends
Till then I'll just pray the sea creatures stay in THAT direction.
 
By: Debbie Kelly
 
I wrote this while down the shore

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Erica Kishpaugh March 11, 2014 at 7:35 AM Hahaha!!! ""creepy yet mesmerizing .... kind of like my old boyfriends!!"" Too funny

Robert Pettit February 5, 2014 at 3:01 PM This site censored a word in one of my more recent submissions not too long ago. I didn't think it was a bad word. Your write reminds me of the years I lived in Ventnor and Margate. Debbie Mills-Kelly February 8, 2014 at 8:32 PM Hey Robert.... Thanks for reading :) Yes I was in Wildwood at the time.. the Crest in Oct...I never really get down there much anymore... but I do love it... :) Thanks again Robert !!

Chris Boskovski February 4, 2014 at 7:49 PM Oh I like it, a lady not afraid to use her manlier vocabulary. lol Nice one, I can picture the fog rolling in now! great poem. :) xoxo Debbie Mills-Kelly February 5, 2014 at 1:36 PM LOL Thank you.,... I was just goofing off down the shore... Thank you Chris !! :)

Agnes Bugeja February 4, 2014 at 12:51 AM Debbie I can so picture this....thank you for sharing Debbie Mills-Kelly February 4, 2014 at 1:04 AM Thank you so much :)