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Fog Ripens Pink

demure hushed in Avalon fog
weaving fables at grey spindles 
river was tableclothed quiet 
whiteness soft enveloped bodies 
silvery sheath covered psyche
maidens mature into women
protective watchful fog unveils
ripened wombs awakening pink

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sponsor : Nette Onclaud // 2.8.26
contest :  Eight by Eight : theme Fog
 Placing: Third

allusionchangecolorimageryinspirationalfree verse

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Paige Hind

August 3, 2026 at 11:01 PM

beautiful :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 2, 2026 at 12:39 PM

Hello Ghairo, i once had seen a pink cloud. i stared at it for hours. it was so pretty. Blessings my frind. /Darlene/😊

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 3, 2026 at 10:27 AM

Hello Ghairo, That pink cloud was so beautiful. I stared at it for hours. I enjoy watching the clouds. i never know what shape or shapesw I will see., Xx /Darlene/

Ghairo Daniels

August 2, 2026 at 11:19 PM

Oh! I saw one too > fascinating ! I read the scientific reason, but can’t remember now. Xx😊

Paula Goldsmith

August 2, 2026 at 10:54 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative "Fog Ripens Pink" write/story. "Good Luck" I did, "MY FROG FRIEND." Have a blessed day/week to come writing away...............

Silent One

August 2, 2026 at 10:20 AM

I love how your poem creates a dreamlike, mystical atmosphere through its delicate imagery of fog, nature, and transformation. The journey from maidenhood to womanhood feels symbolic, suggesting growth, awakening, and the quiet mysteries of femininity. The soft, ethereal language gives the poem a sense of ancient folklore and hidden beauty.. 🥰 You have a brilliant way with words... best of luck in the contest 🌹

Ghairo Daniels

August 2, 2026 at 11:33 PM

Oh ! ThkU for pop-in Silent One. I slightly remembered “Mists of Avalon” when I saw Contest theme. I read the whole series as a young teen, a very long time ago. Lol. Yeah, initiation into womanhood & manhood is so important & it’s a pity that modern society no longer pay much attention to ceremony around this process : though it is re-emerging. Hav a good week. 🙏

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