Krishnanand Guptar Poet Verse

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Written 22 April 2026 for Six and Seven Poetry Contest of Nette Onclaud

Words Count:  42

Fog in Those Eyes

A gentle fog silently started to form,
Pervading her eyes with a quiet storm
And a hazy veil shrouded her deep,
Secrets her quiet heart learnt to keep,
The world outside turned soft and blurred,
Lost in sadness, she spoke no word.

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Andrea Dietrich April 29, 2026 at 1:17 PM Sad one but beautifully written

Karen Jones April 29, 2026 at 12:31 PM Back to say your somber and beautiful with a soft mysterious energy poem is a winner! Congratulations on your top win!

Valsa George April 24, 2026 at 9:48 PM The fog when slowly creeps outward and inward- into the eyes and into the soul, a person becomes melancholic and no words escape from him/her. A powerful poem with beautiful rhyming. All the best dear friend.

Karen Jones April 23, 2026 at 12:39 PM A somber but melodic poem. I enjoyed reading!