Karen Jones Poet Verse

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Written April 19 2026 for Nette Oncloud's contest Six and Seven 

Fog in those Eyes

Eyes seen as the windows of soul
Can be open or uninviting and closed
Can be blind yet the mind knows
How to enlighten with wisdom and hope
Fog in one’s life lack of growth
Fog in eyes lost goal left exposed

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Andrea Dietrich April 29, 2026 at 1:29 PM Great interpretation of the theme, Karen. Congrats on your win Karen Jones April 29, 2026 at 2:46 PM Thanks Andrea!

Krishnanand Guptar April 29, 2026 at 11:14 AM Congratulations Karen on your win in this contest with a thoughtful poem, with eyes seen as windows of the soul. Loved the opening line. Wish you a pleasant day Karen Jones April 29, 2026 at 12:26 PM I didn’t know! Thank you it’s a nice surprise!

Paula Goldsmith April 20, 2026 at 1:27 PM What a creative "Fog in those Eyes" write. Love your first line. So True... "Good Luck" I did, "BRACELET OF STARS." Have a fun day writing away............ Karen Jones April 20, 2026 at 3:09 PM Thanks for the love!

Valsa George April 19, 2026 at 9:37 PM When there is fog in the eyes, right vision is impaired. Well written. Karen Jones April 19, 2026 at 11:23 PM Thanks for reading Valsa and for the compliment.