Notes About The Poem

Fog in the thoughts

A veil of loneliness falls about like a mist ~
A fog that stirs and blurs my vision.
I can't help but wish you'd appear out of nowhere
as if that were even possible...

Sometimes I'm imagining I too were dead
so I could again be by your side.



AP: Honorable Mention 2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Bauer Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 1:02 PM
sad but very touching, line...
Gauthier Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 5:40 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Ilene.
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