Barbara Gorelick Poet Tetractys

Fog Bound

Coast

Fog bank

Shrouded cliffs

Mysterious

Cyprus trees lean inland against their will

Moisture drips like tears from sodden branches

Lichen on rocks

Seagulls swoop

Waves pound

Wind

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Carol Sunshine Brown July 7, 2010 at 3:58 AM I enjoyed reading your poetry today Barbara. I wish you the best always. Excellent writing today.Love, Carol

Carrie Richards July 6, 2010 at 4:33 PM To get out of the heat....I would enjoy a bit of scenery like this........sounds like our No. Calif coastline, maybe Monterey??!! Let's go Barbara...how about it?? :)

Carolyn Devonshire July 6, 2010 at 1:29 PM Awesome imagery of the coast in this teractys, a form that is new to me. Really think you work well in it, dear LNC. Very vivid descriptions! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A July 6, 2010 at 11:43 AM good visuals of how it would look in the fog, nice write,, P.D.