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Fog Bound

Coast Fog bank Shrouded cliffs Mysterious Cyprus trees lean inland against their will Moisture drips like tears from sodden branches Lichen on rocks Seagulls swoop Waves pound Wind

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/7/2010 3:58:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Barbara. I wish you the best always. Excellent writing today.Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/6/2010 4:33:00 PM

To get out of the heat....I would enjoy a bit of scenery like this........sounds like our No. Calif coastline, maybe Monterey??!! Let's go Barbara...how about it?? :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/6/2010 1:29:00 PM

Awesome imagery of the coast in this teractys, a form that is new to me. Really think you work well in it, dear LNC. Very vivid descriptions! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/6/2010 11:43:00 AM

good visuals of how it would look in the fog, nice write,, P.D.