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Fog

The sky is coated In a film of white The sky and ground meet Together in whiteness They blend in as one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 1/9/2025 5:15:00 AM
There’s nothing more eerie mysterious and isolating as fog and it’s a gift to a poet like yourself when it comes to describing it. Great work Darlene. Here in UK we get our fair share of fogs - thankfully not the smog we used to get when households burned coal fires here back in the 60s / 70s. After reading Pangie’s comment below I’ll add that for the week we stayed in SF in 92 there was a fog every morning that made what we could see of Alcatraz in the distance look very spooky. Cheers - Gary
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/9/2025 9:44:00 AM
Hello Gary, yes the fog is eerie. When you watch someone walking in a field, and you can not see their feet , that is very eerie. It looks like the person is floating in the air. Smog is worse than fog. It is difficult to see. Cheers! /Darlene/
Date: 1/4/2025 4:14:00 AM
I lve fodf and your poem. San Francisco is like foggy every single day around say 5 PM.. It’s a very mystical experience.. I always felt I was in another world. I do miss it a lot.. we have it where I live now but it’s very occasional nothing like San Francisco. Pangie xx
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Date: 1/4/2025 1:09:00 PM
I wish I could explain to you how awesome it is in San Francisco. But I can’t. I know I have written some po3ems about that. We got a little bit of fog here, but nothing like that magic. Here,, it islik3e a sneeze. Pangie
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Date: 1/4/2025 10:55:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, Our fog does not last to long. it could be for until the morning, Or if starts in the evening it last till maybe a few hours. Hugs. /Darlene xxx/
Date: 12/29/2024 9:40:00 AM
Beautifully described! It was foggy here just yesterday! Have a great day Darlene :)
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Date: 12/29/2024 10:57:00 AM
Hello Kornal Walimbe, Ohj! We both had fog. Thank you. I wish you to have a great day. Happy New Year. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 12/22/2024 2:34:00 PM
So true how you describe it Darlene. Well done ! Merry Christmas :)
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Date: 12/22/2024 3:51:00 PM
Hello Heidi, Yes the fog is makes it hard to see. thank you. Merry Christmas. All the best for the New Year. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 12/20/2024 10:12:00 PM
Scary to drive in - make sure your fog lights are on Darlene - Have a Merry Christmas - Hugs Maria
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Date: 12/21/2024 9:04:00 AM
Hello Maria, Yes i will. Merry Christmas. All the best for the New Year. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 12/18/2024 6:40:00 PM
I love the way you've described fog, Darlene. Beautiful imagery! Merry Christmas, Evelyn
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Date: 12/19/2024 9:37:00 AM
Hello Evelyn, thank you for this wonderful comment. Merry Christmas and all the best for the New Year. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 12/18/2024 1:24:00 PM
Yes, that is exactly how it looks. Scary to drive in!!
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Date: 12/18/2024 4:06:00 PM
Hello Andrea, Yes scary to drive in. It is hard to see when walking. Merry Christmas. all the best for the New year. Hugs. Darlene/
Date: 12/18/2024 6:43:00 AM
- We've had a lot of fog lately ... you describe it great ... (the days are gray and not blue :) - Wishing you and your loved ones a peaceful and Merry Christmas, Darlene :) - hugs
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/18/2024 10:09:00 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, The sky is grey here. A dull day. Thank you . Wishing you a Merry Christmas and all the best for the NewYear. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 12/18/2024 5:38:00 AM
Hi Darlene, that's the best description of fog I've ever read, sending you and your loved ones, my best wishes for Christmas and the new year God bless. xx
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Date: 12/18/2024 10:12:00 AM
Hello John, thank you for this wonderful comment. Thank you for the Christmas wishes. I am wishing you a Merry Christmas and all the best for the New year. God Bless. xx
Date: 12/17/2024 11:53:00 AM
Hello Darlene, this a beautifully written piece. Wishing you and your family a wonderful Christmas holidays, my friend. Love and hugs.
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Date: 12/17/2024 3:03:00 PM
Hello Zyrool, Hi! so nice to see hyou. thank you for the wonderful comment. merry Christmas and all the best for the New Year my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 12/16/2024 10:06:00 PM
Fog is so dangerous Darlene, Was going to work one morning and could hardly see where I was going. Wishing you and your family a very happy Christmas and good health and happiness in the new year.. Tom
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Date: 12/17/2024 9:53:00 AM
Hello tom, Yes fog is dangerous. it is hard to see ahead when on the road. Thank you. I wish the same for you and your wife. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 12/16/2024 3:45:00 PM
Great imagery Darlene thanks for sharing and have a lovely Christmas with your loved one's...
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Date: 12/16/2024 4:11:00 PM
Michael Tor, thank you for this wonderful comment. mewrry Christmas. All the best for the New Year.. /Darlene/
Date: 12/16/2024 2:19:00 PM
Hello Darlene, cute light poem! Have a wonderful season :-)
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Date: 12/16/2024 3:08:00 PM
Hello Abdullah, thank you for this lovely comment. Blessings my friend. Merry Christmas. All the best for the New year.. /Darlene/
Date: 12/16/2024 1:27:00 PM
Nicely penned, Darlene! Happy Holidays to you. Hugs!
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Date: 12/16/2024 2:11:00 PM
Hello Marliene Evans, so nice to see you. Merry Christmas and all the best for the New Year. thank upu for thje lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/

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