Notes About The Poem

- Focus On Truth -

I've heard
                                         blue bird

                                         your eyes
                                         tells lies

                                         the fear
                                         so clear

                                         get back
                                         on track

                                         fresh chance
                                         last dance






                                      ~ 10.11.2022 ~
                                  Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2022 at 2:05 PM
well penned ~
George Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 9:05 PM
Great Footles exhorting us to tell the truth and tell the truth only. Love and hugs, dear Smile
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 1:36 AM
- Thank you very much, Valsa :) - hugs
Babcock Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 11:43 AM
A great message contained in these footles. love phyl
Wolf Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 8:28 PM
He'll pray? -- No way! ... Enjoyed these footles, Anne-Lise. ~ Truth, or Consequences
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 1:36 AM
- Thank you very much, Gershon :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 5:12 AM
Well done!
Andresen Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 9:43 AM
- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 1:49 AM
Short and very sweet. Best for a win.
Andresen Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 9:43 AM
- Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs
Daniel Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 11:52 PM
Wonderfully penned footles with a great message, Anne-lise:)
Andresen Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 9:43 AM
- Thank you very much, Jo :) - hugs
Roper Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 12:27 PM
Great little Footles Brian will love..Good luck in the contest. Many Blessings my friend
Andresen Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 12:32 PM
- Thank you very much, dear Eve :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 12:17 PM
These little footles are so cute, and this one is just lovely Sunshine, Best one I have read so far. Good luck in the competition.
Andresen Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 12:26 PM
- Many thanks for always being sweet and kind, Wendy :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 12:15 PM
Go back on track--new chance last dance. Potent message succinctly delivered, Anne-Lise. Best to you.
Andresen Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 12:31 PM
- Most people deserve a second chance - Many thanks, Vijay - Really appreciate your support :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 11:57 AM
Nicely penned footle..., Anne-Lise. Enjoyed reading this. Hugs
Andresen Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 11:59 AM
- Thank you very much, Las :) - hugs
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