Joanna Daniel Poet Senryu

Focus On Forgiveness

God is merciful
I confessed my transgressions
He forgave my sins
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Receive remission
redemption through Jesus' blood
repentance is must
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Be tender-hearted
to forgive one another
we are forgiven
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He forgave them all
though his brothers had sold him
remember Joseph
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"Father, forgive them,
for they know not what they do" --
best example shown

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20.8.16

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Pashang Salehi August 26, 2016 at 3:08 AM Very nice Jo...

Sara Chansarkar August 23, 2016 at 12:42 PM Simply lovely,Jo!Congrats on your win!

Kai Michael Neumann August 22, 2016 at 2:08 AM This is beautiful. Congratulations. I like your style and the message. Kai

Connie Marcum Wong August 22, 2016 at 2:05 AM A truly beautiful set of senryu Jo. Congratulations on your wonderful first place win! 7 ; )

Sandra Haight August 21, 2016 at 4:49 PM Jo, this is a very inspirational 'forgiveness' Senryu. Congratulations on your 1st Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper August 21, 2016 at 1:55 PM Beautiful said, Jo, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Charlie Smith August 21, 2016 at 1:43 PM Inspirational win Jo, congratulations...

John Hamilton August 21, 2016 at 11:45 AM Congrats on your number 1 win, very beautiful.

Beautiful Scars August 21, 2016 at 10:29 AM Jo...what can I say about this poem? Remarkably perfect for what I was looking for! You are so gifted and God has blessed you with the gift of writing so deeply with magic...beautiful dear Jo...congrats on your top win and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo Joanna Daniel August 24, 2016 at 8:33 AM Thank you Laura:) I am nothing without my God:) All glory be to Him alone:)

James Inman August 21, 2016 at 9:18 AM Jo, very nicely done. A lovely poem.

Pashang Salehi August 20, 2016 at 7:07 PM Amen.... Bless you... I need your prayer as well.

Andrea Dietrich August 20, 2016 at 6:15 PM Nicely done, Jo. I think it is just what she was looking for.

John Hamilton August 20, 2016 at 9:36 AM Very spiritual write Jo, a delight to read this today. Pearls of wisdom strung together in this senryu necklace. I see a winner here!

Sara Kendrick August 20, 2016 at 8:59 AM Jo, God has to have His hand in there for there to be any healing..I like your thinking..Thanks for the visit to my blog..What is new with you???Sara..Jesus forgave His accusers but they did not accept His forgiveness so sad.. Joanna Daniel August 21, 2016 at 4:12 AM Nothing much on my front, Sara..I'm keeping myself busy writing poems, after I quit my job..

Demetrios Trifiatis August 20, 2016 at 7:50 AM Pearls of Senryu dear, Jo! Great writing! A 7!

Connie Marcum Wong August 20, 2016 at 5:57 AM To err is human; to forgive, divine. Alexander Pope....I agree with your last stanza which is the best lesson Jesus taught Jo. Very nice! : ) 7

Probir Gupta August 20, 2016 at 5:08 AM Really best example ... wise and nice ...