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Fo'C's'Le Ashes

Ashes collected into the collated casks and Corked with animus, Moon Girl pounded on. Drumming a dirge on the tanner's own flesh. Pounding the seed of echoing hope. Please go to https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/focsle_-_a_dream_1332542 for the balance of the poem. Thanks! Submittted: Liberum Divisa 6 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Gregory Richard Barden Date submitted: 5/28/21 From: "F'oc's'le - A Dream" Link to: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/focsle_-_a_dream_1332542 Result: Premier Contest - 2nd place trophy

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/28/2021 9:14:00 AM

Powerfully penned Ken with strong, vivid images that move your lines along lyrically. Congratulations on your win! Go dawgs!

Ken Rone
Date: 8/28/2021 11:12:00 AM

Thank you Sam. This was a pecular contest...3 months to await the outcome. I almost withdrew it because it required only a snipit of rhe whole, out of context. Anyway, I'm pleased and thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2021 11:33:00 AM

Very interesting verse. I love the descriptiveness.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/8/2021 11:22:00 AM

WoW! Ken, These for lines are good on their own—good content and imagery. I need to read the poem these lines were taken from. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Ken Rone
Date: 6/8/2021 3:41:00 PM

I appreciate your comments very much. You are regarded for your competance and literary expertise. I am honored. - Ken

Angela Crabtree

Date: 6/7/2021 6:20:00 PM

A wonderful verse from beginning to end, Ken. I enjoyed it! :)

Ken Rone
Date: 6/8/2021 11:02:00 AM

Thank you so much Angela. It is great to hear from you. - Ken

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/5/2021 11:58:00 AM

Profound writing, powerful imagery, beautiful verse, my dearest friend, Ken. Good luck in the contest!

Ken Rone
Date: 6/8/2021 11:04:00 AM

You know how waiting for a contest to end is tense. I'm thinking that the strategy is to submit as close to the deadline as possible. - Ken

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/1/2021 12:40:00 PM

Deep poem Ken with many symbolism and imagery, the last line has it all: Doing their utmost to expand hope by smashing the germ of echoed hope. Good luck in the contest Ken

Ken Rone
Date: 6/1/2021 6:04:00 PM

Best always Lasaad - Ken

Ken Rone

Date: 5/29/2021 10:58:00 AM

Fredric: Thankyou so much for your comment and especially for reviewing the "Fo'c's'le - A Dream" poem it came from!! I appreciate your Marine experience, and if you worked the Northern waters (like my dad did during the War) one always had their eye on the plimsoll line. I'm writing this here as an entry because in trying reply to your intriguing comment I Deleted it instead!! Best Regards - Ken

Frederic Parker
Date: 5/29/2021 2:37:00 PM

thank you for the information, well done

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/28/2021 11:44:00 AM

Hi, Washington Huskie! I like the feeling of ritual and movement here, makes me think of a drum circle, best wishes for the contest!

Ken Rone
Date: 6/1/2021 6:17:00 PM

Thank you so much Michelle for taking the time to read the full piece. Yes, the rythms of an isolated life away from home and civilization.