Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Rhyme

Flying Yearning

The scarlet sun inflames the horizon over sensuous sea,
the sublime gift of a new dazzling day sails across to me.
From the fringe of seamless serenity gold laced clouds rise,
on their satin wings to your charming sky my yearning flies.

July 27, 2020
Contest : Four Lines
Sponsor : Constance La France

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Constance La France July 29, 2020 at 5:17 PM Subimal, congratulations on your win in my 4 line contest with this excellent write, a FAV for me _Constance

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 29, 2020 at 11:36 AM Lovely done, lush imagery. Congratulations on your win Subimal! xomo

Line Gauthier July 28, 2020 at 6:43 PM Lovely imagery, Subimal ~

Jan Allison July 28, 2020 at 2:06 PM beautiful rhyme i especially liked the imagery in the third line, many congrats on your win Subimal:-) hugs jan xx

Aditi Mishra July 28, 2020 at 1:23 PM Congratulations on your win Subimal!

John Watt July 28, 2020 at 9:50 AM Congratulations on your win with these yearning words and beautiful depiction of a lovely sunrise and the hope it brings ~ John

John Hamilton July 28, 2020 at 8:34 AM Another beautiful write congrats Subimal on another win!

Carolyn Devonshire July 28, 2020 at 8:30 AM Beautifully penned, Subimal. Congratulations on your top win!

Jenna Logan July 28, 2020 at 4:35 AM your lines are so wistfully written. Congratulations, Subimal.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 28, 2020 at 3:02 AM - Four beautiful lines, Subimal ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands July 27, 2020 at 5:34 AM Beautiful poem Subimal :)