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Flying Yearning

The scarlet sun inflames the horizon over sensuous sea, the sublime gift of a new dazzling day sails across to me. From the fringe of seamless serenity gold laced clouds rise, on their satin wings to your charming sky my yearning flies.
July 27, 2020 Contest : Four Lines Sponsor : Constance La France

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Date: 7/29/2020 5:17:00 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in my 4 line contest with this excellent write, a FAV for me _Constance
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Date: 7/29/2020 11:36:00 AM
Lovely done, lush imagery. Congratulations on your win Subimal! xomo
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Date: 7/28/2020 6:43:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Subimal ~
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Date: 7/28/2020 2:06:00 PM
beautiful rhyme i especially liked the imagery in the third line, many congrats on your win Subimal:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/28/2020 1:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Subimal!
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Date: 7/28/2020 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with these yearning words and beautiful depiction of a lovely sunrise and the hope it brings ~ John
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Date: 7/28/2020 8:34:00 AM
Another beautiful write congrats Subimal on another win!
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Date: 7/28/2020 8:30:00 AM
Beautifully penned, Subimal. Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 7/28/2020 4:35:00 AM
your lines are so wistfully written. Congratulations, Subimal.
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Date: 7/28/2020 3:02:00 AM
- Four beautiful lines, Subimal ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/27/2020 5:34:00 AM
Beautiful poem Subimal :)
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