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Flying Swallows

Flying Swallows With breeze at dawn twinkling sunshine. Drunken Swallows, flying in wine. Who else is here? Drunk in his madness! Destination is near; journey of sadness. My wings are aging, painful, and tired. I know for a fact I will get fired. I’m not afraid of what will happen. Sunset or sunrise, which is in heaven? We become part of infinite wisdom. It doesn’t matter; the ultimate kingdom. Everything circles; a circle is hollow. If you are flying, fly with a Swallow! Haloo 1/4/2011

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/9/2016 9:54:00 AM

Hi Pashang, If you are flying, fly with a swallow. Yes, i do Love that line. Myself, i am forever flying the spirit is free. Yes my friend, we are all part of the same thought, the same life force. This piece does sing for me. I do Love the content. Well done Pashang. A seven and a fave my little friend for this little gem.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/9/2016 6:04:00 PM

Vladislav, they say Ravens always fly away from light. You're different, you are the LIGHT, full of DELIGHT.... You wrote " we are all part of the same thought, the same life force". Do you know "Pantheism" it is a religion/ belief that the Universe (or nature as the totality of everything) is identical with divinity or GOD. Therefore, we are all GOD or at least a part of him. Cheers