Flying Swallows

Flying Swallows


With breeze at dawn twinkling sunshine.
Drunken Swallows, flying in wine.

Who else is here? Drunk in his madness!
Destination is near; journey of sadness.

My wings are aging, painful, and tired.
I know for a fact I will get fired.

I’m not afraid of what will happen.
Sunset or sunrise, which is in heaven?

We become part of infinite wisdom.
It doesn’t matter; the ultimate kingdom.

Everything circles; a circle is hollow.
If you are flying, fly with a Swallow!

 
	Haloo        1/4/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 9, 2016 at 9:54 AM
Hi Pashang, If you are flying, fly with a swallow. Yes, i do Love that line. Myself, i am forever flying the spirit is free. Yes my friend, we are all part of the same thought, the same life force. This piece does sing for me. I do Love the content. Well done Pashang. A seven and a fave my little friend for this little gem.
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February 9, 2016 at 6:04 PM
Vladislav, they say Ravens always fly away from light. You're different, you are the LIGHT, full of DELIGHT.... You wrote " we are all part of the same thought, the same life force". Do you know "Pantheism" it is a religion/ belief that the Universe (or nature as the totality of everything) is identical with divinity or GOD. Therefore, we are all GOD or at least a part of him. Cheers
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