Flying Solo

A black Ocean consumes
as it pours forth 
splitting heaven,
as stars fall to comets
and vortex into my
gasping mouth,
I swallow
every last spec of light 
in my world


so overwhelmed
I spew endless streams
of angered refusal
and splutter embers


as my mouth burns
in the light of ever’s
I now know


to deny 
from the world
the smallest scrap 
of glimmers
is not to live


swimming free 
from oceans
and regurgitated


Now,
I stand on 
virgin beach
alone 


consumed in light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/14/2009 7:26:00 AM
Happy xmas until the month of january 2010'.
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Date: 12/13/2009 1:45:00 PM
Continue to inhale that light, Jayne, and let it take you to a higher plane where Christmas joy fills the air. Intriguing, thought-provoking write. Well done! Happy Holidays! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/11/2009 8:28:00 AM
Jayne, I think of other poems you wrote before, and examine the range of emotions here comparing other things. You have matured into a mastery ... you have found the voice that owns the metaphors of life. Well done!
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Date: 12/11/2009 8:19:00 AM
Outstanding write, Jayne! Your talent shows well! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/11/2009 4:18:00 AM
Very interesting poetry you have posted today Jayne. I enjoyed reading it. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors. Praying all is still going well for you my friend Love, Carol
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Date: 12/10/2009 4:42:00 PM
what up and I really enjoyed this poerty, straight to the point and straight to my heart. Enjoy your night. :)
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Date: 12/10/2009 10:50:00 AM
Terrific poem Jayne, powerful >> James
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Date: 12/10/2009 3:17:00 AM
Wow!, creativity at its best. Nice write I really loved the ending "Now, I stand on virgin beach alone consumed in light"
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