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Poetic Form: Limerick
Inspired: 2024 August 24
Image: N/A

Flying Off Course

On a plane flying to Vancouver,
An odd lady said that I knew her,
I was just flabbergast,
After years now at last,
My wife of forty is much cruder.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Buhagiar Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 1:48 AM
Too old to be recognised. Great fun.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 2:05 AM
I'm tryin to keep abreast with them flyin around--scary bit Brazil, be home soon haven't forgotten you I did read yours but there's a three-year old likes to play with my laptop. Aloha
mysore Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 1:41 AM
a light-hearted comment for the limerick dear friend. be cheerful dear poet. did I hurt?
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 2:00 AM
Absolutely none at all, my firend--innocent it was or else I'd kept it in the closet along with my humor and walk sulking all day--it's well and good ...
mysore Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 1:22 AM
don't you fly inside a plane dear poet. no using 'crude' else you will be well oiled! lol happy day dear friend.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 1:32 AM
Mahalo and thank you, thriveni, yes I do fly although it isn't a reflection upon my person, yet sadly, I fly alone these days my friend. Aloha William
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