Flying Off Course

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Poetic Form: Limerick

Inspired: 2024 August 24

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On a plane flying to Vancouver, An odd lady said that I knew her, I was just flabbergast, After years now at last, My wife of forty is much cruder.

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/24/2024 1:48:00 AM

Too old to be recognised. Great fun.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/24/2024 2:05:00 AM

I'm tryin to keep abreast with them flyin around--scary bit Brazil, be home soon haven't forgotten you I did read yours but there's a three-year old likes to play with my laptop. Aloha

thriveni c mysore

Date: 8/24/2024 1:41:00 AM

a light-hearted comment for the limerick dear friend. be cheerful dear poet. did I hurt?

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/24/2024 2:00:00 AM

Absolutely none at all, my firend--innocent it was or else I'd kept it in the closet along with my humor and walk sulking all day--it's well and good ...

thriveni c mysore

Date: 8/24/2024 1:22:00 AM

don't you fly inside a plane dear poet. no using 'crude' else you will be well oiled! lol happy day dear friend.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/24/2024 1:32:00 AM

Mahalo and thank you, thriveni, yes I do fly although it isn't a reflection upon my person, yet sadly, I fly alone these days my friend. Aloha William