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Flying In Winter's Wind

hooves pounding in snow manes flying in Winter's wind mustangs on the hills ****************** December 19th, 2016 John Lawless * Troika

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Date: 2/24/2017 8:37:00 PM
Beautiful imagery.
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/16/2017 3:32:00 PM
Thank you, James.
Date: 1/17/2017 1:21:00 PM
Love the picture you paint, congratulations Lin....
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/17/2017 1:53:00 PM
Thank you, dear Charlie. This was the last of me you'll see in Poetry Soup. I hope you're well and happy....big HUGS!
Date: 1/14/2017 10:44:00 PM
best one here
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/15/2017 10:44:00 AM
Thank you, Connie. A generous comment like yours is greatly appreciated.
Date: 1/14/2017 10:34:00 PM
A very zippy Haiku, Lin. Congratulations!
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/15/2017 10:43:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 1/14/2017 9:53:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku,,, congratulations on your win.... Hugs beautiful
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/15/2017 10:43:00 AM
Thanks and hugs back to you, sweet one.
Date: 1/14/2017 6:11:00 PM
So pretty! I see them! Congrats, Lin!
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/15/2017 10:42:00 AM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 1/14/2017 4:06:00 PM
I love the image you project in this three liner, Lin! Well done, and congrats on your fine win! Regards // paul
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/14/2017 4:16:00 PM
Thanks ever so much, Paul. It was my last contest on PS, entered some time ago and I've moved on. I hope you're well.
Date: 1/14/2017 4:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win Lin
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/14/2017 4:15:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph.
Date: 1/14/2017 3:08:00 PM
Beautiful image, congrats on your win, Lin.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/14/2017 4:14:00 PM
Thanks so very much.
Date: 1/14/2017 2:55:00 PM
well-spoken for the theme, Lin. I commend you on a fine title, troika, and placement.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/14/2017 4:14:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 1/14/2017 1:36:00 PM
Can't believe I missed this gem Lin many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/14/2017 4:14:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. You haven't missed a thing...you're here now ;-). Take care, my sweet friend.
Date: 1/14/2017 1:20:00 PM
great job Lin, I could see and feel the beauty of the mustangs running free. Thanks for entering the contest.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/14/2017 4:13:00 PM
Thank you for a placement in your contest, John. I was under the impression the mention of "hooves" in your description literally meant in relation to horses. Interestingly enough, the first three honored were not of that idea. lol All great writes by your top ten finishers. I will take this moment to say that this was the last poem I'll ever enter on the site. My well wishes to you, John, and to all those writers that have encouraged me in my time here.
Date: 12/22/2016 7:48:00 PM
Very nice Lin .. Merry Christmas to you
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/24/2016 10:20:00 AM
Thank you very much for the comment and the season's wishes. They are returned to you.
Date: 12/21/2016 2:07:00 PM
Just Beautiful Lady Lin...God Bless & Merry CHRISTMAS!!!...^WW^
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/21/2016 4:31:00 PM
Thanks, ^WW^...as ever~Lin
Date: 12/21/2016 7:28:00 AM
This is amazing, I can picturise it:) God has really blessed you with such amazing talent:) hope you are keeping well :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/21/2016 9:23:00 AM
Hi, Jo. Thanks so much. God has blessed me with many things, but I'm not as talented as many...you among them.
Date: 12/19/2016 2:25:00 PM
Beautiful picture you have drawn with your words, Lin:)
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/19/2016 7:01:00 PM
Thanks so very much, Danny.
Date: 12/19/2016 12:05:00 PM
This was beautiful Lin. So filled with movement and freedom and beauty. A wonderful scene your words have painted today
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/19/2016 6:59:00 PM
It's a memory from the time I lived in Colorado. Thanks for the read and comments, Chris.
Date: 12/19/2016 10:41:00 AM
This is fantastic Lin...Great image
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/19/2016 10:45:00 AM
Thanks, and we posted at the same time. I just left a comment on your limerick. Hugs, dear man.

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