Pandita Sietesantos Poet Quintain (English)

Flying High

Flying High

I yearn to spread my wings and fly,		
a fearless eagle soaring high.			
To be free like the wind and sing,			
finding beauty in everything.			
Like white clouds, I seek the blue sky!		
	


The form is Spanish Quintain or Quintilla: Rhyme scheme: a, a, b, b, a 
Iambic Tetrameter 8 syllables per line

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Toni Orban December 11, 2015 at 3:57 PM Nice form simple sweet and direct lifts the spirits! Pandita Sietesantos December 12, 2015 at 8:16 PM Thank you dear Toni for your kind words and kind support for my work! Have a great weekend! Pandita

Eric Boddie August 20, 2015 at 9:28 AM flying high is a Beautiful thing....natures Beauty with Spiritual Bling....Life without worries, only comfort and care....that sounds like Heaven, I Want To Live There....;) Pandita Sietesantos August 20, 2015 at 10:40 AM I always enjoy your lovely poetic responses! I even have recurring dreams of flying through the universe passed stars and planets and I feel an incredible sense of euphoria that I wish I could hold on to during my waking hours:-) Oh well - back to earth - back to reality:-) Have a beautiful day, Eric! Pandita

Robert Lindley July 22, 2015 at 9:54 PM Fly high, enjoy the blue of God and sky. Lovely form , great poem.. A7 Pandita Sietesantos July 24, 2015 at 8:56 PM Dear Robert, you're so sweet for leaving me this lovely compliment and high grade. Thank you kindly, my friend! Pandita

Skat A July 21, 2015 at 1:13 AM Pandita, thank you for sharing your wings. :) To see so much beauty in everything. Love it Love SKAT Pandita Sietesantos July 21, 2015 at 7:22 AM Awwww! SKAT A, many thanks for your kind words and continued support of my work! Warmest regards. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich July 13, 2015 at 4:03 PM oh YES, this is really cool. It is a bit like the one I did for that contest of Nette's (only that one is not rhymed) WE both wish to fly!! Pandita Sietesantos July 15, 2015 at 8:38 AM Thank you so very much, Andie! Yes, we both share the love of freedom and flight! I read your piece and it's really a winning beauty! Pandita

Kika Ayala July 11, 2015 at 12:03 AM Lovely, Pandita! It makes me feel like doing the same! This is a 7 from me. Have a nice evening. Kika Pandita Sietesantos July 11, 2015 at 12:24 AM Thank you dear Kika for your kind words and always kind support for my work! Have a great weekend! Pandita

Scott Thirtyseven July 10, 2015 at 3:25 AM Great rhyme structure, wonderful lifting words. Nice write. Pandita Sietesantos July 10, 2015 at 9:55 AM Hi Scott, thank you so very much for your wonderful support and sweet compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Casarah Nance July 6, 2015 at 9:06 PM I love the way you fly, Nicely done! :) Pandita Sietesantos July 6, 2015 at 9:30 PM My dear Casarah, thank you so much for stopping by and leaving such a lovely compliment! Warnest regards. Pandita

Alexis Y. July 6, 2015 at 8:31 PM Pandita, l see you flying really high. Your well written piece allowed the reader to park take of the journey with you. Excellent job.:-) Alexis Pandita Sietesantos July 6, 2015 at 10:39 PM Hi Alexis, thanks very much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts on this piece! I really appreciate your compliments - helped to make my day:-)! Pandita

Kp Nunez July 6, 2015 at 12:32 PM Soar high little eagle! May you always find that warm wind beneath your wings...this is beautiful in its brevity, Pandita. hugs! Pandita Sietesantos July 6, 2015 at 4:14 PM Awwww! Many thanks, dear Kim, for your kind words and continued support of my work! Warmest regards. Pandita

Harry Horsman July 6, 2015 at 11:15 AM this is beautiful and very visual,,, Pandita Sietesantos July 6, 2015 at 4:13 PM Hi Harry, thank you so much for visiting and leaving your wonderful compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Milton Robertson July 6, 2015 at 7:06 AM I get a feeling of total freedom. Beautifully Done Pandita. God Bless. Pandita Sietesantos July 6, 2015 at 4:12 PM Yes, you are so right it's about feeling free! Thank you, my friend, for your kind compliments! All the best. Pandita