Flying First Class

On a plane.
                                           Erotic affair in the cockpit.
                                                   Sacred merging,
                                            intensified by turbulence.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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The Drunken Poet Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 9:51 AM
LOL I am glad all of you enjoyed this poem.xoxoxo
Allen Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 2:14 AM
I guess the plane was on autopilot. MMMM the mile high club ? ? Huggs TLee
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 4:25 PM
Those thoughts are very scary..If I ever go in an airplane somewhere all I will be able to think about will be this poem..Sara
Horsman Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 10:28 AM
if only, like this Elliot, and the message. harry
Rossman Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 12:39 AM
first class must be greeaaatttt.
Northeast Avatar
April 26, 2012 at 9:24 PM
Cleverly written Elliott, Blessings, bren : )
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