Flying

A bird that's born in a gilded cage
learns of flying at an early age
Even though it must call its own home
a perch inside its small, golden dome.

To spread its small wings one day, to soar
over mountains, oceans, even more
to fly to greet early morning star
are but dreams behind its golden bar.

To sit atop snowy mountains high
observe the world with a keen bird's eye
To meet those flocks it has never known
and tell bird tales of skies it has flown

it sings of life beyond golden gate
its songs are of the joy that awaits
when it can fly in an endless space
flying in a cloud, touching wind's face

Though the bird in cage will never know
its songs are sweet as in a meadow
it cannot fly because of clipped wings
but it can dream, so lovely bird sings.

February 16, 2023
for "Writing Challenge - F Words"
by Constance La France
Flying
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February 23, 2023 at 10:27 AM
Back with congratulations on your well-deserved contest win.
Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 1:40 PM
Congratulations on your poem being on Constance's winners' list. Way to go. Sara
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February 21, 2023 at 12:32 PM
Ann, this so reminds me of I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings. Dreams live even when they don't have wings. Well done. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
Peck Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 4:01 PM
I know. I didn't want the title to encroach on Maya Angelou's title of her incredible poem, but I couldn't come up with a good title. :)
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February 21, 2023 at 9:20 AM
Ann, a wonderful poem and congratulations on your win my Writing Challenge - F Words, well done, blessings, Constance
Clear Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 11:24 AM
Anne, Again you touch on all our dreams. Love this..........so hopeful and at same time, appreciative..They ARE flying back! Another winner! Like the wind 'neath my sails...........suzanne
Wolf Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 7:35 PM
Just gorgeous, Anne. 'The Caged Bird Sings' -- most definitely. A Great write. Thanks, Gershon
Peck Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 4:56 PM
I hate to see birds alone in a cage. I had two lovebirds--little parrots. I let them fly each day when I cleaned their cage. I miss them. Thanks, Gershon! You're so nice!
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February 17, 2023 at 1:41 AM
Wonderful imagination. So many birds in captivity, but at least they are fed and produce songs. Best for a win.
Peck Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 4:59 PM
Thank you, Victor. It would help, I think, if people would give them a friend. We all need a friend :)
Poet Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 7:09 PM
Ann, such a fantastic work is a delight to read. Your work is made even more beautiful by the wondrous diction and metaphors you employ. Win big
Peck Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 4:53 PM
Thank you, Lasaad, but you're the one with the beautiful words!
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