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Marietes

- Fly, Virgin Mary -

Dear little insect
                         «Our Lady's Bird» bring good luck
                                               ~
                                     Aphids for supper
                               a red robe with seven dots
                               Virgin Mary sent from God









08.07.2018
Sun :) A-L Andresen :)
Tanka: 5-7-5-7-7 syllable
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Raven Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 6:51 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, the ladybird has life within your most wonderful words. The ladybird, small, yet beautiful can touch the heart when seen. The wonders of nature do sing in your heart. Love the content Anne-Lise. have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Andresen Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 1:00 PM
- Thank you so much Mike, your comment warms and motivates for further work :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
B. Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 11:50 AM
Your poem is incredibly sweet, Sunshine.. Ladybugs are so graceful! Enjoyed this very much! Many blessings to you..
Andresen Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 12:54 AM
- Thank you so much for your very kind comment, Robertina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Neumann Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 2:37 AM
Diversity. Here in South Africa the lady birds are yellow with black spots...
Andresen Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 12:54 AM
- Many thanks, Kai :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michael Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 2:44 PM
I missed this lovely poem...Very sweet Lady B ...All the best Anne-Lise
Andresen Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 2:46 PM
- I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 12:55 AM
So soft and sweet! I will have to check my own garden now!!! :)
Andresen Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 8:49 AM
- Thank you so much Arthur, for your very kind comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ball Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 12:44 PM
I love this Anne-Lise. Ladybugs are a favorite in my garden. If I see one I actually catch it and take it home to my own garden and turn it loose. I have a special garden to attract butterflies which are my very favorites. This is a great one. God Bless, JB
Andresen Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 1:28 PM
- Ladybugs are useful insects to have in your garden ... I love butterflies, there have been many this summer :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kiser Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 9:19 AM
Oh I love ladybugs and you've painted this poem to reflect the simplest things in life while, depicting a little insect as a wondrous being from God. Very well done; favoriting.
Andresen Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 11:50 AM
- Many thanks, M.L. :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 4:18 PM
Clever tanka... Ants collect aphids and place them on my dahlia flowers... Oh the wonders of nature...
Andresen Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 8:31 AM
- Many thanks, S.O. :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 11:21 AM
just incredibly charming, anne... you're a lady bug!...happy huggs
Andresen Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 1:33 PM
- Thank you so much for your very kind comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentile Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 9:26 AM
Just lovely, Anne-Lise xxoo
Andresen Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 1:33 PM
- Thank you so much for your very kind comment, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 8:13 AM
This is quite pretty. Hugs Rick.
Andresen Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 1:32 PM
- Richard, thank you so much for your very kind comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Man Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 9:54 PM
Sunshine.. Tonight, the mountain sky is clear. In a few hours the stars will tease me with their winks. The twilight is for your poem, and it's as enjoyable as the coming sunset!
Andresen Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 1:32 PM
- Thank you so much for your very kind comment, L.M. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 8:31 PM
this is beautiful, Sunshine... Hugs eve
Andresen Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 1:31 PM
- Many thanks, Eve :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 6:28 PM
I love Lady Birds, evokes such joy in kids, I still remember the fascination of observing them. Your Tanka is amazing Anne-Lise, so is the image....Maria hugs
Andresen Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 1:31 PM
- Many thanks, Maria :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 5:00 PM
so sweet, dear!!
Andresen Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 1:30 PM
- Thank you so much for your very kind comment, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 4:40 PM
LOve the Tanka, and the subject matter is amazing..
Andresen Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 1:30 PM
- Many thanks, Harry :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 3:40 PM
Simply beautiful, Anne-Lise!
Andresen Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 1:12 PM
- Vijay, thank you so much for your very kind comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 2:03 PM
A delightful Tanka, as delightful as the "Lady" it describes dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx
Andresen Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 3:17 PM
- Many thanks, Demetrios :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 1:51 PM
Beautiful tanka, I've only seen one in the garden this year Anne-Lise, as a child I used to see hundreds in the hedgerows:-( hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 1:12 PM
- Jan, thank you so much for your very kind comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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