Fly Away

--Fly away.
We were compelled to believe that all men are created equal,
But they lied to our fore fathers and we are just the sequel.
You can turn back the page and gaze at what the truth reveals
Or ask your parents or grandparents to tell you how they feel.
 
At the bottom of the totem pole, set there on purpose
To see if you can climb up, but tell me is it worth this
To have “power” but your only power is to purchase
Never having any depth, just hovering above the surface.
 
Curiosity killed the cat, remember that what’s accepted is fact
Don’t retrace what’s been replaced, there 'll just be egg on your face.
 
But be not defeated by foes and adversaries
be motivated to be the 1st and pop all these virgin cherries.
 
The world is ever-changing and they need your wise mind
If you must, turn your back and let your eyes be blind
To anything negative and only be positive
How will your light shine if you always keep it closeted?
 
Soar among the tallest building and live right between the skies
Success is not an easy path, but unused talent always dies.
To be able to wake up every day is not a given but a blessing
Don’t squander the opportunity to teach the world a lesson.
 
Don’t be afraid to raise the roof higher and tell the devil he’s a liar
If you stay on top of your game then the world is yours to acquire.
--Fly away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/24/2014 5:36:00 PM
You have a talent for rhyming and it really shows in this poem. I also like the positive message that you bring within your words. Terrific writing, Dominique! ...Thank you for the kind comments. I appreciate it very much.
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Dominique Johnson
Date: 3/10/2014 12:41:00 PM
Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it! I always enjoy sharing the love!
Date: 2/24/2014 9:58:00 AM
This is a good rhyme. Better yet, this is great. Keep it up man. Enjoyed.
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Dominique Johnson
Date: 2/24/2014 2:31:00 PM
Thank you, I appreciate it!
Date: 2/21/2014 6:40:00 PM
"We were compelled to believe that all men are created equal, But they lied to our fore fathers, and we are just the sequel." first of all wanted to say that is a very powerful entry into this poem, the word choice and the rhyme scheme seem to fit together perfectly. I'll be reading more! my only suggestion is to add a coma where I put it ^^^^^^
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Dominique Johnson
Date: 2/24/2014 2:29:00 PM
Thanks for the suggestion and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 2/21/2014 11:23:00 AM
I luv it lets colbo hardworker87@hotmail
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Dominique Johnson
Date: 2/24/2014 2:28:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it! Whenever you want to work just drop me a message in my inbox.
Date: 2/21/2014 12:43:00 AM
You have expressed yourself nicely with these verses.
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Dominique Johnson
Date: 2/24/2014 2:26:00 PM
Thank you!
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