fly away

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Peter had to fly, was that just last night? I have attachment issues. I hate saying goodbye - it always makes me cry an embarrassing tear or two. Holidays go so fast relativity’s been proven at last! Fourteen days of leisure of sordid intertwined pleasures on days free of study pressures. This morning i was in despair splayed out on an uncomfortable chair with tangled, unbrushed hair wearing faded PowerPuff underwear bored, and wishing Peter was there.

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/18/2024 6:43:00 AM

Dear Anais, You artistically captured the bittersweet essence of farewells and the longing for moments frozen in time. Through whimsical imagery and candid emotion, you express the struggle of letting go and the yearning for permanence in fleeting joys. I loved that it's a relatable reflection on the transient nature of time and the deep-seated desire for connection. -Blessings, Daniel

Anais Vionet
Date: 3/18/2024 4:29:00 PM

I write these things, just to earn one of your beautiful reviews, you know. =]

David Kavanagh

Date: 3/17/2024 5:03:00 PM

Well the good news is Peter won’t be out of a job anytime soon, I read Cern are planning on building a bigger LHC; called the FCC, and will come online in 2070! A fun write the Botox and (Step) your Stepdad is hilarious, you can’t be the weakest link, you’re practically holding the whole cast together, cheers David

Anais Vionet
Date: 3/17/2024 5:59:00 PM

I shortened the poem - got red of the mom & step parts - I decided I hated it. *shrug* I suppose I AM the series lead =]