Fluttering Wings

Chained to past sorrows restrains fluttering wings Break free and fly where ever you wish to go

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/10/2017 5:10:00 AM

If only it were so easy, Lin...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/8/2017 9:43:00 AM

Excellent advice, Lin. That's is the poetic spirit I choose to attain unto. Love the title to this lovely poem. Pure poetry. Love and smiles always.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/30/2017 7:35:00 PM

I can relate so much and I sure am flying high with my poetry Lin and nothing in life is going to hold me back:-) hugs jan xx

Frederic Parker

Date: 11/30/2017 1:07:00 PM

yes, you may visit the past, never live there

Tim Smith

Date: 11/30/2017 12:36:00 PM

It is true Lin...good to read you, I've been away

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/30/2017 12:02:00 PM

great advice, lin, but i think it's not so easy to break free in life. excellent poem, though...

Lin Lane
Date: 11/30/2017 12:04:00 PM

Not from life...from the past. Thanks, Ilene.

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/30/2017 10:40:00 AM

Past is a reference, although planned the future can be precarious...It's only now we can truly live and enjoy...All the best Lin...A lovely poem

Lin Lane
Date: 11/30/2017 10:52:00 AM

True of life today, Arturo. Life will be better if we live it with the future in mind. Thanks so much for your thoughts.