Fluttering Wings

Chained to past sorrows restrains fluttering wings
Break free and fly where ever you wish to go

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/10/2017 5:10:00 AM
If only it were so easy, Lin...
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Date: 12/8/2017 9:43:00 AM
Excellent advice, Lin. That's is the poetic spirit I choose to attain unto. Love the title to this lovely poem. Pure poetry. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 11/30/2017 7:35:00 PM
I can relate so much and I sure am flying high with my poetry Lin and nothing in life is going to hold me back:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/30/2017 1:07:00 PM
yes, you may visit the past, never live there
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Date: 11/30/2017 12:36:00 PM
It is true Lin...good to read you, I've been away
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Date: 11/30/2017 12:02:00 PM
great advice, lin, but i think it's not so easy to break free in life. excellent poem, though...
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Date: 11/30/2017 12:04:00 PM
Not from life...from the past. Thanks, Ilene.
Date: 11/30/2017 10:40:00 AM
Past is a reference, although planned the future can be precarious...It's only now we can truly live and enjoy...All the best Lin...A lovely poem
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/30/2017 10:52:00 AM
True of life today, Arturo. Life will be better if we live it with the future in mind. Thanks so much for your thoughts.
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