Fluttering Wings

 
"To be in nature remote, alone is to enter a portal into another realm unknown." Quote _by Constance When broken I find peace in nature's essence, surround by lush trees, birds, and butterfly wings; I sink into tranquil peace and quiescence. How lovely a butter' on a flower clings; oh my- a bright hummer' pulls on my heartstrings ! In hidden places birds twitter songs for me, I hear the whisper of their wings fluttering; wish I had wings filigree and feathery. Now a bumblebee glides his buzz uttering; Oh, what are those sweet little birds muttering ! I feel a veil of peace falling in my mind, wish I could bottle this feeling and keep it; when a return to nature and my soul twined. And all those fluttering wings will never quit; for in my memory each scene- I commit ! ______________________ February 04, 2022 Poetry/Quintain(English)/Fluttering Wings Copyright Protected, ID 02-1427-878-04 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Quintain (English) sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 03/17/2022 First Place
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Date: 3/18/2022 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your exquisite Quintain...first place win in the contest. You have captured and created a lovely visual of the joy of nature. :)Paulette
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Constance La France
Date: 3/18/2022 3:28:00 PM
Paulette, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment on my poem ~Constance
Date: 3/17/2022 9:43:00 PM
Such a beautiful work! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/18/2022 3:29:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~Constance
Date: 3/17/2022 6:55:00 PM
What a lovely poem Constance ! Thoroughly enjoyed the beauty of your fluttering wings ! Nature and its little winged beings stand out as perennial sources of joy in your poem ! Congratulations on our top win !
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Date: 3/18/2022 3:30:00 PM
Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, the comment, and congratulations ~Constance
Date: 3/17/2022 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations, Constance! I love your poem! Your choice of words is perfect and beautiful for portraying your message from your quote! I can imagine myself in the calm of nature and envision the details through your vivid language. Well done! Much love...Meghan
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Constance La France
Date: 3/17/2022 1:55:00 PM
Meghan, thank you so much for the congratulations, the comment and compliment, love ~ Constance
Date: 3/17/2022 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations Constance! Your amazing poem "Fluttering Wings", has placed "First" in my contest. You should take pride, for it was a most difficult contest, but your poem stood out and caught my eye. Very well done my friend, Emile.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/17/2022 9:19:00 AM
Emile, thank you so much for the inspiration and the contest, and my wonderful placement. And for the congratulations and compliment ~ Constance
Date: 2/8/2022 12:49:00 PM
Nature is so very spiritual; it's a place to go and be with one's creator. Beautifully done.
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Date: 2/9/2022 2:07:00 PM
ML, thank you so much for the comment and compliment ~Constance
Date: 2/7/2022 3:43:00 PM
Hello Constance ... being with nature and observing the work each fauna individual combines with the flora takes us into a peaceful and calming situation - nice work Constance - Lindsay
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Constance La France
Date: 2/8/2022 7:12:00 AM
Lindsay, thank you so much for the lovely comment and compliment ~ Constance
Date: 2/7/2022 8:34:00 AM
Big wow! Top of the charts!
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Date: 2/7/2022 9:56:00 AM
Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment ~ Constance
Date: 2/4/2022 7:46:00 PM
i smell a winner HERE. wow, such lovely writing, Constance. So beautiful. A fave
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Date: 2/5/2022 7:39:00 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for the lovely compliment and the the best compliment a FAV ~ Constance
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