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Fluttering Hearts

Fluttering hearts enter passion's realm Floating on wings in blissful flight As leaves rustle on slender elm Fluttering hearts enter passion's realm Passion's fire seems to overwhelm Yet in its glow they find delight Fluttering hearts enter passion's realm Floating on wings in blissful flight 7-7-2024

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Date: 7/16/2024 12:03:00 PM
' Floating on wings in blissful flight, ' And that's the way it should be. Being that close is a very beautiful moment, indeed. Your thoughts are so dreamy and romantic. Filled with the right amount of passion. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 7/10/2024 10:54:00 AM
Joseph, a beautiful romantic Triolet, well done, Constance
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Date: 7/8/2024 4:28:00 PM
The tenor of your song is rhythmically adorable, joseph... great job!
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Date: 7/8/2024 2:07:00 PM
Nice arrangement of words that rhyme and flow so well..
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Date: 7/8/2024 10:49:00 AM
This is a terrific triolet. It achieves artistic perfection.
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Date: 7/8/2024 1:54:00 AM
I truly love your short poems, So full of meaning.
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Date: 7/7/2024 7:43:00 PM
So lovely, Joseph. And thanks for your last contest
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