Joseph May Poet Triolet

Fluttering Hearts

 Fluttering hearts enter passion's realm
 Floating on wings in blissful flight
 As leaves rustle on slender elm
 Fluttering hearts enter passion's realm
 Passion's fire seems to overwhelm
 Yet in its glow they find delight
 Fluttering hearts enter passion's realm
 Floating on wings in blissful flight

 7-7-2024

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Brandy Nicole July 16, 2024 at 12:03 PM ' Floating on wings in blissful flight, ' And that's the way it should be. Being that close is a very beautiful moment, indeed. Your thoughts are so dreamy and romantic. Filled with the right amount of passion. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy

Constance La France July 10, 2024 at 10:54 AM Joseph, a beautiful romantic Triolet, well done, Constance

Nette Onclaud July 8, 2024 at 4:28 PM The tenor of your song is rhythmically adorable, joseph... great job!

Silent One July 8, 2024 at 2:07 PM Nice arrangement of words that rhyme and flow so well..

Hilda Greenhough July 8, 2024 at 10:49 AM This is a terrific triolet. It achieves artistic perfection.

Victor Buhagiar July 8, 2024 at 1:54 AM I truly love your short poems, So full of meaning.

Andrea Dietrich July 7, 2024 at 7:43 PM So lovely, Joseph. And thanks for your last contest