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Fluttering eyelashes

The barren stem in my heart, seeks a rose That enlivened thus, we feel how love grows Come dear one, let’s take a chance Without touching, we will dance It matters not to me, if your slip shows

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Date: 1/15/2024 12:58:00 AM
Strange ideas, dancing without touching and a slip slipping. Very original.
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Date: 1/15/2024 1:21:00 AM
Strangeness enlivens, offering surprise, delighting the heart, so I take it you are happy, dear Victor :)

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