Fluttering eyelashes

The barren stem in my heart, seeks a rose
That enlivened thus, we feel how love grows
     Come dear one, let’s take a chance
     Without touching, we will dance
It matters not to me, if your slip shows
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Buhagiar Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 12:58 AM
Strange ideas, dancing without touching and a slip slipping. Very original.
Seeker Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 1:21 AM
Strangeness enlivens, offering surprise, delighting the heart, so I take it you are happy, dear Victor :)
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