(For the shape haiku poetry contest, sponsored by JCB brul)
* * * y * (.> * a * << /)) w * " a * * birds flutter <.) * their * ((\/>> wings * "" * flapping in* the* a i r - * frolicking f * * * l * y * * ('')> e * << /)) r * .. s *
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