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(For the shape haiku poetry contest, sponsored by JCB brul)

 

* * * y * (.> * a * << /)) w * " a * * birds flutter <.) * their * ((\/>> wings * "" * flapping in* the* a i r - * frolicking f * * * l * y * * ('')> e * << /)) r * .. s *

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Paul Callus
Date: 7/6/2025 1:32:00 AM
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I love overall what you did here, Tania! I must say I admire your patience and eye for detail! ~ congratulations on the top placement // paul
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/6/2025 5:15:00 AM
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Paul, thank you.
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Len Gasun
Date: 7/4/2025 8:42:00 PM
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Adorable my dear poet friend Tania! Congratulations on your well-deserved first place win! Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you always. Hugs
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/5/2025 5:01:00 AM
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Len, thank you.
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Vanya Evangeline
Date: 7/3/2025 12:05:00 AM
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Love the cute birds. the alliteration is really a nice touch. Congrats
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/3/2025 3:26:00 AM
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Vanya, thank you.
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/2/2025 6:58:00 PM
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cute. congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/3/2025 3:25:00 AM
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Thriveni, thank you.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/2/2025 7:21:00 AM
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Perfect :) Congratulations Tania! :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/3/2025 3:25:00 AM
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Linda, thank you.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/1/2025 11:06:00 PM
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Lovely one with great alliteration too. Congrats
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/2/2025 3:32:00 AM
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Andrea, thank you.
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Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/1/2025 7:07:00 PM
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lil birds are so cute !!! Well deserved place.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/2/2025 3:33:00 AM
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Wendy, thank you.
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 6/24/2025 7:42:00 AM
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Tania, you certainly had fun with this. I imagine you deserve an honorary degree in design engineering for it. Hope you are well. Smiles!!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/24/2025 1:19:00 PM
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Duke, thank you.

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