Flute

inhales the life breath blooms it out into music --- tilt transformation 19 February 2023

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Date: 2/22/2023 7:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being on Brian's winners' list. Way to go. Sara

Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/15/2023 10:20:00 PM

Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Date: 2/21/2023 10:26:00 AM

A very fine Haiku indeed. Your final line is note of grand completion. Congratulations! Brian

Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/22/2023 3:22:00 AM

Thank you very much. May God Bless You.

Date: 2/19/2023 9:49:00 PM

Nice one, Christuraj:)

Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/20/2023 12:58:00 AM

Thank you very much. May God Bless You.

Date: 2/19/2023 3:56:00 PM

Great imagery and juxtaposition in this Haiku; clever fun.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/19/2023 8:29:00 PM

Thank you very much. May God Bless You.

Date: 2/18/2023 11:37:00 PM

A good poem. Well done.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/19/2023 8:30:00 PM

Thank you very much. May God Bless You.