Flu

wide-eyed owls gossip about ducks sneezing,achoo... night air filled with pox hound dogs wear nose masks sore throats itch non-stop... freakin’ bird flu romps! ~HAIKUS FOR FUN~ © Tracie Edwards' Ku -Ku by nette onclaud

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James Fraser

Date: 3/3/2011 1:02:00 PM

Goosie goosie gander, in freakin' flu wander. Lovable funny Haiku Nette, good luck in the Chris's contest.....:) smiles 4 u

Kash Poet

Date: 3/2/2011 9:15:00 PM

Just fantabulous!Love it!go for the win!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/2/2011 3:16:00 PM

Funny honey for sure and great use of the Alliteration for the contest.. Chris will luv as I do .. my friend.. good luck for this one reads winner winner winner luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/2/2011 3:00:00 PM

Nice visuals you have created with this alliterative haiku, nette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2011 12:39:00 PM

I don't know what Chris was worrying about you all seem to have what he is asking for. Wishing you the best in the contest Nette. Love, Carol

Sidney Beck

Date: 3/2/2011 9:33:00 AM

well done Nette( freakin flu...L O L )...as usual a marvel...I will stay out of this contest, for I don't wish to deny you victory....affectionately and grovellingly ....Syd :))

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/2/2011 9:11:00 AM

this sure is fun, Nette- I wonder what those green geese are gossiping about? haha chismosa me ;) hugs :)

John Freeman

Date: 3/2/2011 9:01:00 AM

Great alliterations NET, surely do well in Chris' contest. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/2/2011 8:46:00 AM

oh well.. chris said we should have fun! :)