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Flowing Words

the ups and downs the lefts and rights the twisty trails the ongoing fights the lessons learned the love thats grown the feeling of family the feeling of alone the choatic noise the silent air your wild and crazy in your secrective lair The people you meet the strangers you cross the bonds that forge and relationships lost the feeling of alive is nothing without hurt can't wash away nothing unless you got dirt the way you respond to lifes crazy fashion is a quick little inside to your deepest passions Live on to the fullest to the greatest extent expect nothing elaborate and just be content push for what you want dont ever feel destroyed do it all yourself and feel overjoyed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/17/2009 2:12:00 AM
The ending verses, " Do it all yourself, and feel overjoyed", raw feelings here and the title suits such a piece, for your words are flowing indeed. Intresting.. Love, Sami.
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Date: 7/29/2009 3:43:00 PM
Very nice, whimsical and deep at the same time, keep on writing ,Mark
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Date: 7/27/2009 11:32:00 AM
Superbly rhymed piece Lisa, and a lovely poem>>James
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Date: 7/20/2009 2:24:00 AM
Interesting writing. Sara
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Date: 5/12/2009 7:20:00 AM
Such a mastery of words...you have talent Lisa Green!
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Date: 5/12/2009 3:24:00 AM
Them words they definately flow, and what a good flow it is.
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