Flowing Love

My love for you ~flows~
it flows like ocean ripples
a constant tide of
continuous current
spinning

~Flows~
like a melody
of falling raindrops
in a puddle of
passion

My love ~flows~
free as the wind
off a river bed
serene as an
ocean view

Lay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Maverick Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 3:02 PM
Really enjoying this Lay..good discription easy flow rich feel.! oh and soup mail..!
Neels Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 11:49 AM
Wow Lay, this is a beauty you have here.. Absolutely dig the flow of this write of yours.. You made me ;-) while reading this one - tc Wilma
Brown Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 9:55 AM
Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us Lay. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol
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July 11, 2011 at 7:51 AM
wow! what a wonderful flow! Thanks Lay.,..p.d.
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