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All that we need to know will be revealed
Let us not employ thought to analyse 
Clear light of truth is by maya concealed
Aspect allowing is graced by surprise 

Once we cease playing game of illusions
No fetters remain that bind and confine
Egoless presence exits delusion
As head and heart with throb of love align

Outer world fades as we dwell in silence 
Blissful world within is so beauteous
We flow gently in childlike innocence 
Rapture enlivenment continuous

Earth life destiny unfolds as ordained
Divine benedictions softly ingrained

02-April-2021

Entry for: your best sonnet this year so far
Sponsor: John Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 4/23/2021 10:37:00 AM
Congrats US on your entry placing in my contest!
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/23/2021 8:04:00 PM
Thanks for the recognition, John! :)
Date: 4/5/2021 12:24:00 PM
This went straight to my fave list. You grabbed me up in the first line and ran with me, and I loved it!
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Date: 4/5/2021 7:16:00 PM
Thanks Caren! Delighted that this one is a favourite for you! :)
Date: 4/2/2021 10:40:00 AM
A lovely write...I wish I was in it.
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Date: 4/2/2021 6:53:00 PM
You are!

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