Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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This picture is very much like the creek that I like to go to which helps to relax me and open my mind and heart for creativity..

Flowing Creek Water

Since the rain graced our little creek,
Running whooshing liquid fills crevices
Of rocks, pebbles then babbles squeak.
Racing surging constantly balances

Cadences of rhythm causes gurlging.
The poetic quality calms relaxes.
Lapping kisses caress stones~no pounding.
Calming tranquil scene heart rhythm fixes.

Ameliorate health; opens wide heart
To nature_ and wonder of soothing
Sounds~creek's gushing words of art
Relaxing mind__accommodating

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Don Johnson September 30, 2011 at 6:55 PM Think you have nailed it down, water sink swim or drown, pleasant sparkle of the sound, hypnotising without frown, most times...

Fabiyas M V September 24, 2011 at 10:24 AM Water and thoughts are perfectly blended,Sara Sweetly penned for the contest.

Nette Onclaud September 24, 2011 at 9:08 AM moods of water so intricately woven here , sara..i like the whooshing sound! best of luck with huggs, nette

Marilyn Hernandez September 24, 2011 at 4:15 AM So vivid and full of imagery, almost therapeutic! You perfectly captured the theme of "Flowing Water." Good luck in the contest (and thanks for your comment too).

M. Hussain Effendi September 24, 2011 at 1:27 AM Nice picture you've painted there, best of luck for the contest, Sara

Andrea Dietrich September 23, 2011 at 11:43 PM I like your theme on flowing creek water. It really is a great sound,isn't it?

Wole Francis September 23, 2011 at 6:36 PM this is a lovely poem Sara and best of luck in the contest

Nancy Jones September 23, 2011 at 6:12 PM ah, yes... the relaxed mind... beauty thing. Thanks for the write, Sara. Namaste~N