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Flowing By Me

Shrub with birds Ponder what they say. Sun slumps down. As temp drops,  We might have a clone, they claim. Cool hunch, wonder where.
Written: January 24, 2022
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Buhagiar Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 1:51 AM
Today is the lowest temperature. 44F, Cool you might say but for me we're not used to it.
George Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 7:35 PM
As the sun slumps and the temperature drops, the birds, perhaps of the same clone huddle together and slump.... ! Lovely poem and telling image, Lasaad !
Calasibetta Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 1:28 PM
I like the personification of the shrub~clever~ and your photo brilliant! Blessings, Paulette
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 12:45 PM
Spot the difference, Clones to you and me Lasaad, but I’m reckoning completely individual to each other, ain’t life great is what I’m taking from this one, cheers David
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