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Shrub with birds Ponder what they say. Sun slumps down. As temp drops,  We might have a clone, they claim. Cool hunch, wonder where.
Written: January 24, 2022

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Date: 1/25/2022 1:51:00 AM
Today is the lowest temperature. 44F, Cool you might say but for me we're not used to it.
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Date: 1/24/2022 7:35:00 PM
As the sun slumps and the temperature drops, the birds, perhaps of the same clone huddle together and slump.... ! Lovely poem and telling image, Lasaad !
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Date: 1/24/2022 1:28:00 PM
I like the personification of the shrub~clever~ and your photo brilliant! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 1/24/2022 12:45:00 PM
Spot the difference, Clones to you and me Lasaad, but I’m reckoning completely individual to each other, ain’t life great is what I’m taking from this one, cheers David
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