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The cheerful freesias peep Out of the cold wet soil And share their fruitful fragrance With lovers of the moon. Spring is already with us Mimosas form their blooms We celebrate Women's Day And sprays will abound I'm sure. Oh everyone is happy Except our poor Josefa Who works in snowbound Snowbird Utah And yearn for our new spring blooms. But dear Jo, how I do wish, That Spring has never come For already I'm sneezing Spring fever is around.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 1/25/2021 8:19:00 AM
Spring does bring the allergies around so inside I stay.. and Josefa might be better off if aliment of allergies. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/24/2021 8:39:00 PM
Yes, Spring is near. Even though flowers make you sneeze, they certainly make a beautiful bouquet. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
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Date: 1/23/2021 3:59:00 AM
This made me smile. "Oh everyone is happy Except our poor Josefa Who works in snowbound Snowbird Utah And yearn for our new spring blooms." Poor Josefa!
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Date: 1/22/2021 7:41:00 PM
Great poetry, Victor, love the reaction to the allergy..
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Date: 1/22/2021 5:06:00 PM
A beautiful and upbeat for sure. But I’m like you Vic, I suffer a great deal in spring with allergies.
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Date: 1/22/2021 2:08:00 PM
It’ll be lovely when flowers come forth in Spring and hearts start to sing. Beautiful poetry Victor ~~ Belle
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Date: 1/22/2021 12:07:00 PM
- I dare not dream of spring yet, Victor ... but, I look forward to the wonderful time :) - A lovely poem :) - Have a safe and warm weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/22/2021 8:18:00 AM
A beautiful upbeat poem, Victor. I'm waiting patiently for Spring :)
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Date: 1/22/2021 8:02:00 AM
I love spring and feel for those who do suffer from hay fever.. the buds are forming on trees and daffodils are peeping out from the soil so spring is on its way. delightful poem Victor:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/22/2021 7:05:00 AM
Terrific write my friend Victor. Our winter has been relatively mild and I am looking forward to an early Spring -especially after reading this. Linda
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Date: 1/22/2021 5:38:00 AM
Loved the happy tunes of spring and the splendid imagery you created, Victor. A charming poem--like spring is!
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Date: 1/22/2021 5:09:00 AM
The opening line and its verse - cheerful freesias, fruitful fragrance, lovers of the moon and then the dastardly clincher of a sneeze. Well done, my friend!
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Date: 1/22/2021 2:32:00 AM
Spring is beautiful anyway, Victor, lovely write:)
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Date: 1/22/2021 1:48:00 AM
Thankfully ive never suffered from hay-fever but know many that do. Roll on spring. Tom
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Date: 1/22/2021 1:13:00 AM
Love it. A blessing from your pen. Love and prayers sent your way
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