Flowers

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~Flowers~ 
(Acrostic Poem) 
(From my flower collection poetry)- 



R- esting so beautiful among the flower beds, 
0- bject of man's devotions, 
S- ending your message of beauty to all, 
E- ndearing, among them you're the best 

I- n a colorful display your bearded face, 
R- anting to the Sun, all day and night, 
I- ntroverted you bow to the ground but 
S- till in your grace you kiss the Sun! 

M- iracle dressed up in yellow,oranges 
A- dding to your presence more warmth, 
R- adiating such a beauty under the sun, 
I- nviting within your petals lights, 
G- oing around in circles,endless 
O- bvious to my eyes,you're having fun, 
L- ayers of softness,so ilusive you are 
D- ancing away under the magic of the Sun! 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
Ladydp2000 
copyright@2000



December,20,2014

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Arlene Smith

Date: 12/21/2014 9:41:00 PM

A beautiful bouquet you have displayed,Dorian!!.. Big hugs, dear friend.. Arlene

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/21/2014 10:06:00 PM

Hello Arlene! Thank you so much for awesome comments. I really appreciated my dear friend! :) have a great day! Love and hugs! xxxx D,

Paul Callus

Date: 12/21/2014 3:15:00 PM

Well done Dorian! Very creative triple acrostic; enjoyed all three flowers. // May I take this opportunity to wish you a joyous Christmas and all the very best for 2015. // paul

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/21/2014 8:48:00 PM

Hi there Paul very dear friend! Thank you and much appreciated. The same to you! God bless you! You're so kind. :) Love and hugs! xxx D.