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Flowering of the Thought

Belonging to unbelonging was becoming a method exploring the path. In the backyard unpleasant fumes were rising. Nocturnal swoop of enlightment, clearly becomes a festival of yellow death. Who was hiding the truth? Flowering of the thought in sky ripens cessation of grief. Slopes and summits, bring tears in eyes. Solace of ancestral home was gone. Bold ceilings were hung by ungodly fears. Wet hands lift the body of past, classical future was gleaming slowly.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/27/2008 8:42:00 AM
Satish - Congratulations on your feature this week! Wishing you a Happy & Healthy New Year. Peace always, John
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Date: 12/27/2008 4:46:00 AM
Great write..."Who was hiding the truth?" Why damn near everygody, Satish, but once realized, the future will be o.k. Congrats on this fine stuff. Love, daver
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Date: 12/26/2008 6:35:00 PM
Congrats on having your poem featured this week.
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Date: 12/26/2008 6:31:00 PM
Congrats on having your poem featured this week.
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Date: 12/23/2008 6:13:00 PM
Congratulations Satish on Poetry Soup featuring "Flowering of The Thought." Vince
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Date: 12/22/2008 9:22:00 PM
Congrats on being featured this week, Happy Holidays...Raul
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Date: 12/21/2008 7:21:00 PM
Satish - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/21/2008 5:50:00 PM
Well done, Satish!! Amazing poem, and so well described..well deserved to be a featured write this week. Congratulations, and best wishes!~ Carrie
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Date: 12/21/2008 5:09:00 PM
Congrats on being featured.
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Date: 12/21/2008 4:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/21/2008 2:56:00 PM
Interesting use of imagery in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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