Flowering of the Thought

Belonging
to unbelonging
was becoming a method
exploring the path.
In the backyard unpleasant fumes
were rising.

Nocturnal swoop of enlightment,
clearly becomes a festival
of yellow death.
Who was hiding the truth?

Flowering of the thought in sky
ripens cessation of grief.
Slopes and summits,
bring tears in eyes.

Solace of ancestral home
was gone. Bold ceilings were hung by ungodly fears.
Wet hands lift the body of past,
classical future was gleaming slowly.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 27, 2008 at 8:42 AM
Satish - Congratulations on your feature this week! Wishing you a Happy & Healthy New Year. Peace always, John
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December 27, 2008 at 4:46 AM
Great write..."Who was hiding the truth?" Why damn near everygody, Satish, but once realized, the future will be o.k. Congrats on this fine stuff. Love, daver
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December 26, 2008 at 6:35 PM
Congrats on having your poem featured this week.
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December 26, 2008 at 6:31 PM
Congrats on having your poem featured this week.
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December 23, 2008 at 6:13 PM
Congratulations Satish on Poetry Soup featuring "Flowering of The Thought." Vince
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December 22, 2008 at 9:22 PM
Congrats on being featured this week, Happy Holidays...Raul
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December 21, 2008 at 7:21 PM
Satish - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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December 21, 2008 at 5:50 PM
Well done, Satish!! Amazing poem, and so well described..well deserved to be a featured write this week. Congratulations, and best wishes!~ Carrie
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December 21, 2008 at 5:09 PM
Congrats on being featured.
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December 21, 2008 at 4:04 PM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday! Love, Shar
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December 21, 2008 at 2:56 PM
Interesting use of imagery in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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