Notes About The Poem
This poem is an example of a poem written in minichu format for my new contest.
Format of the New form of Rhyme named MlNICHU is as follows:
Total12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each).
Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD.
4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3.
Poem should stick to a chosen theme through all stanzas. A twist can be introduced in third stanza, if required by the theme, to make it more interesting.
Syllable count :
Stanza 1: 6,12,3;
Stanza 2: 4,8,2;
Stanza 3: 2,4,1;
Stanza 4: 6,8,1.
Flowering Minichu
Buds of heart break open
spread myriad hues of joy, cheer, and happiness
Mend broken
Sacrifice self
Ending spring of color, fearless
In shelf
Encore
Childlike, blameless
Pure
Buds of heart break open
Ending spring of color, fearless
Pure
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