David Fisher Poet Limerick

Flower Power-God's Must Be Crazy

There’s a prickly old man who seemed lazy
Yet while loafing he pushed up a daisy
And said with some practice
He’d force up a cactus
Just to prove that the gods must be crazy

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Poet Destroyer A January 26, 2016 at 10:24 PM David, Congratulations on your winning poem. XOX - LINDA -

Ralph Sergi January 20, 2016 at 9:15 AM Congratulations on a good win!

Scott Williams January 19, 2016 at 11:21 PM Super cool. I really like this one. Congrats on your win.

Sandra Haight January 19, 2016 at 11:33 AM Hi David, stopping back to congratulate you on your stand alone First Place win! Awesome! Sandra

Teddy Kimathi January 19, 2016 at 7:09 AM Hahahaha. That's a challenge and a half..... Congrats David, on your first placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Skat A January 18, 2016 at 9:04 PM Great win, David...........SKAT

John Lawless January 18, 2016 at 8:50 PM David this had me laughing out loud. Love this take on the theme and the use of the much maligned Limerick in such a sharp way. Thanks for entering the contest.

Andrea Dietrich January 6, 2016 at 7:34 PM this is AWESOME!!!!

Sandra Haight January 3, 2016 at 10:10 AM Love it, David! Very clever and great for the theme! All the best for the contest. Sandra

Maurice Rigoler January 2, 2016 at 10:01 PM I'vr heard of pushing up daisies, but never cactus! Good limerick, Dave. Thanks for reading about my angel fish. Best to you in the coming year. / M

Jan Allison January 2, 2016 at 10:18 AM LOl made me smile David good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx