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Flower of Morning

pink marigold sun
in my corner of the sky
awaking vision

plum sky's buttercup 
at the sugar frosted pane
day's heartbeat speeds up

daffodil diamond
flower of pearl-orange dreams 
glittering and stunned

a black-eyed susan
chasing the remnants of night
warmth revolution
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Delaney Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 6:37 PM
Hi Evelyn: Such stunning descriptions in Haiku form. The light and colors gave me the feeling of dawn - fresh and different as each day, Beautiful. SuZ
Buehler Avatar
December 17, 2023 at 3:06 PM
Thank you for your very gladdening remarks, SuZ. :)
Empress Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 9:35 AM
How beautiful i always love reading how you depict and deliver different flower names and their meanings, in such a poetic manner and to do that in the form of haiku is beyond brilliant. I especially love the last haiku. Gorgeous! Definitely a new fave for my list.
Buehler Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 12:56 PM
I am so honored by your gladdening remarks, and am thrilled by your fave, my friend. Have a wonderful day. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 6:56 AM
Ahh the lovely colors coupled with the language of flowers!
Buehler Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 12:44 PM
Thank you, Kim. Happy holidays!
Rolland Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 2:48 PM
beautifullly written every ilage and word are magical, really enjoyed evelyn have a sweet week end
Buehler Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 3:45 PM
Thank you for your joy inspiring words, my friend. Hope your weekend is wonderful, too.
Kendrick Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 2:05 PM
Very colorful work you have penned in this one. I enjoyed reading it and seeing the picture to go along with it. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara K
Buehler Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 2:13 PM
I appreciate your warm remarks soooo much, Sara. Blessings.
Andresen Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 1:25 PM
- Lovely colored bouquet, Evelyn :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 1:37 PM
Your appreciation is very nice! Thank you, Anne-Lise. :) hugs
DiMino Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 7:51 AM
Your works all bring gardens and blossoms to my mind and heart. Beautiful writing!
Buehler Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 2:51 PM
So nice to know! Thank you, Joe. Have a blessed holiday.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 8:41 AM
A lovely/colorful ~ write/picture. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
Buehler Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 1:08 PM
Many thanks for your kind expressions. Have a blessed Thanksgiving. :)
Pandit Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 5:37 AM
Delightful voice to your poem--joyful imagery, Evelyn. Much enjoyed.
Buehler Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 1:06 PM
Thank you very much for your treasured comments, Vijay. :)
Greenhough Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 10:20 PM
This poem reminds me of the flowers that can be candied and put on cakes. I noticed a lot of colors, but also a sweetness.
Buehler Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 1:04 PM
What lovely compliments, Hilda! Thank you so much. :)
Roper Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 8:30 PM
Love the bright colorful imagery and feeling in your Haikus. Happy Thanksgiving my friend
Buehler Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 1:03 PM
Thank you for your delightful comments, Eve. A happy Thanksgiving to you and yours, Evelyn
Baker Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 4:19 PM
Beautiful Haikus Evelyn, and the image was just as beautiful as the poetry. I want to congratulate you on three of your poems being published in the latest edition of Poetry Soup's Anthologies! YEAH !!! I also want to wish you a Happy Thanksgiving, my friend. Hugs, Bill
Buehler Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 7:05 PM
Thank you for your lovely, appreciative compliments and kind words of congratulations, Bill. Congratulations to you, on having your 3 poems published as well, and congratulations to your wife, on having her work published. It's a pleasure to have my work appear in such a fine book, and I am in very fine company. I hope your family's Thanksgiving is blessed. Hugs, Evelyn
One Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 2:58 PM
Great use of flowers in your poem and the descriptions are great...
Buehler Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 6:54 PM
Your gracious words bring joy, Silent One. Thank you so much. Have a blessed holiday. :)
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