flower of life : haiku

Sponsor : JCB Brul
submission date : 3/7/25
Placed First in Contest 

   geometric pure
God design for sure, no door ~
all over universe


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           \                      de                    /
             \                  SIGN                /
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Alhemaidy Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 12:36 PM
Great! Congratulations on your winning :-) Have a nice day ~ hugs AA
Daniels Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 3:44 PM
~ hugs to Saudi returned, Poetic friend. Nice day too. GD
mysore Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 9:01 PM
Interesting and lovely. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!
Daniels Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 9:48 PM
Thku, dear poet. Cheers !
Kerr Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 3:09 PM
Ghairo, This is a most impressive, innovative, and intelligent shape haiku. The deployment of symbols in the design outstanding. Thanks for your kind review of my entry Howard
Daniels Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 9:47 PM
THANKYOU for visiting, Howard. I wondered if anybody would c the symbolism. x.
Woods Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 9:55 AM
Hum... you got me stumped with this one! I can see that it is impressive! Xo
Daniels Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 10:10 AM
Lol ! It was fun ! Xo.
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