Flower In the Crannied Wall

It’s just like an intellectuallist
to tear creation from its little nest of stone,
thinking only if it rests in his hand,
if he can see all its white veins
will he grasp its mysteries. 

Maybe this is why he knows
Death
so well,
and God so little. 

Who, wanting a lover, seizes it out of life,
and lays its corpse in a tender repose,
trying to fathom the truth of what it means to smile?
The smile the autopsy leaves is no mystery. 

A flower in a crannied wall
is a mystery 
no more for the taking
than laughter. 

Posted March 4, 2020
For Craig’s Flower in the Crannied Wall contest
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Lawless Avatar
March 16, 2020 at 10:19 AM
WOW...great take on the theme Jack. Sharply pointed.
Webster Avatar
March 16, 2020 at 10:42 AM
Thank you, John!
Smith Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 7:41 PM
Congrats Jack. :)
Webster Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 8:07 PM
Thanks Gary!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 5:16 PM
I favor the first verse! Congratulations, Jack on 3rd place!
Webster Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 7:26 PM
Thanks, Kim!
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 13, 2020 at 3:55 AM
This is very well written. Great poem! Congrats on your win
Webster Avatar
March 13, 2020 at 11:22 AM
Thank you, Krish!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 7:55 AM
Oh wow. I love this. A fave. Congratulations for your win Jack! xomo
Webster Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 10:04 PM
Thanks, Maureen!
Puddifoot Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 7:47 AM
i really enjoyed this one, a deep and profound take on the theme, well expressed and well written - congrats on your win!
Webster Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 1:09 PM
Thank you, Charlotte
Carber Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 6:36 PM
Really well done-- my highest compliment: 'I wish I had written it!' Especially dig the 2nd stanza--congrats!
Webster Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 6:46 PM
Thanks so much Carber!
Kauffman Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 4:42 PM
Jack, congratulations on your win. Your perspective gives us room to ponder why we would scoop up life only to wonder why it died.
Webster Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 4:52 PM
Thank you, Sam. Glad you enjoyed
Poteet Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 2:28 PM
Or perhaps like some poets. I enjoyed your take onCraigs contest. Congrats!
Webster Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 4:51 PM
Thank you, R.A.P.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 1:30 AM
A marvelous contender for the contest. I feel this is a winner!
Webster Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 6:47 AM
Thank you, Caren! It would be fun!
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