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Premiere Contest WinnerFlower In the Crannied Wall

Oh, flower in this crannied wall,
how did your roots prevail and sprawl
from seed that landed in a crack-
so shallow, small, in woods set back
from warm sun rays, to grow in shade
with vines about you- old and frayed?

Your blossom glows a vibrant red;
you stand out bright among the dread
of tangled sprays and dried-out brush.
Your velvet petals boldly blush
just like a ruby- precious stone-
shines on a tarnished ring, alone.

My Cinderella, come with me-
this fine glass jar- your slipper be;
a perfect fit, it shields your foot
of roots now clean of forest soot.
Soon, fertile soil you'll thrive upon-
a princess rose on my green lawn,

beside a prince who grew so tall-
and too was rescued, roots and all.

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February 5, 2023
2022 Poetry Marathon Qualifiers' FINAL Placement Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: Mark Toney
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Ashley Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 9:25 PM
Dear Sandra, I just adore this poem! It is such a pleasure to partake in the artistic and amazing beauty of this piece once again. Congratulations for your excellent final placement in Mark's Marathon contest. I'm both thrilled and honored to share the podium with you. If I remember correctly, didn't you win the last Poetry Marathon contest? You are such an accomplished and gifted poetess, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Haight Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 5:09 PM
Dear Susan, thank you so much for your very supportive comments and congratulations. I appreciate your kind words. And, I am honored to share the podium with you! Yes, I did win the last Marathon contest in 2019, and I am so happy that you were chosen this time because your beautiful poetry, and especially your winning poem are so worthy of this Marathon's First Place honor! Congratulations again! Hugs, Sandra
Lane Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 8:38 AM
Dear Sandra, I was delighted to race the marathon with you. I’ve always admired your poetic talent.
Haight Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 11:29 AM
Thank you, so much, Lin for your visit and uplifting comment. It was fun to participate in racing with such an accomplished poetess as you! Hugs, Sandra
Toney Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 1:21 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your Eighth Place, overall win in my 2022 Poetry Marathon! Thank you so much for contributing to the success of both the 2019 and 2022 contests. The poems of the 28 qualifiers can be accessed from my current "Finish Line" blog post, along with the top 15 placements and their overall stats. Write on!
Haight Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 7:48 PM
Mark, thank you so much! I am so pleased that I made your winner's list, and I had a great time competing in your contest! I appreciate all your work that went into running these Poetry Marathon Contests, and I thank you for offering them! Looking forward to the next one! Sandra :)
Mccann Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 4:47 PM
Amazing poem. I was savoring its riches when the delightful prince appeared!
Haight Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 5:07 PM
Thank you, Elizabeth, for your visit and uplifting comments! Much appreciated! Sandra
Radice Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 6:44 AM
Congratulations on your trophy winning poem Sandra. I love the hardiness of nature - how a flower can exist in a crag in a wall. Exist it does but that's all it does in your poem fighting to survive.. until that is, the lonely flower's fairy Godmother comes to its aid (and rescues it from those ugly vines) so that it can grow and bloom happily ever. :) Your Cinderella theme adds depth to an already very clever write. I really enjoyed it! Cheers - Gary
Haight Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 5:06 PM
Gary, so nice of you to stop by with your congratulations and excellent insight into what my poem conveyed! I love your interpretation which is perfect! So happy you enjoyed it, and thank you! Sandra
Ashley Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 5:35 PM
Dear Sandra, I relish the graceful beauty of your rhythm and rhymes, your poem is exquisite in imagery and the emotion it evokes. Congratulations for your excellent trophy win in Mark’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Haight Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 5:03 PM
Dear Susan, thank you once again for stopping by with your very kind, thoughtful comments, and congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
George Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 4:06 AM
'your velvet petals boldly blush just like a ruby- precious stone- shines on a tarnished ring, alone.' Great comparison. The reference to Cindrella story adds so much of flavor to your poem. Indeed an outstanding composition, well deserved for the trophy win !Congratulations, Sandra ! Into my FAVE
Haight Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 4:59 PM
Hi, Valsa! Thank you very much for stopping by to read my poem and leaving your uplifting comments and congratulations- as well as saving it in your Faves! So much appreciated! Sandra
Watt Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 11:32 PM
Sandra, I remember this gem from the Craig Cornish contest two years ago, and I relish the opportunity to re-read it today and absorb your poetic talents. Simply beautiful... congrats for your #1 ~ John
Haight Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 4:55 PM
Wow, John, so pleased that you even remembered my poem from a previous contest! Thanks so much for stopping by again and leaving your uplifting comments and congrats! Much appreciated. Sandra
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July 15, 2022 at 3:28 PM
The easeful flow of your rhyme reinforces the vibrancy of the red bloom enduring the pinch of the crannied wall. The Cinderella allusion is icing for readers to savor. Superbly written! Brian
Haight Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 4:54 PM
Brian, I am so thankful for your visit and your very encouraging comments about my poem. I am so happy you enjoyed it! Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 12:20 PM
Wow Sandra, this is spectacular! I was filled with emotion while reading this. Nature constantly amazes through all kinds of obstacles. I love this poem so much I am putting it straight into my Faves! You deserve the Trophy my friend. I am so happy it was given to you! Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
Haight Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 4:52 PM
Connie, that you so much for reading my poem, for your wonderful, uplifting comments, and for the Fave! You are very kind, and I am most appreciative! Hugs, Sandra
Goldsmith Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 8:51 AM
Congratulations on your win. A Creative write/picture. Have a blessed day writing away...............
Haight Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 4:51 PM
Thank you, Paula, for the congratulations and lovely comment! Hugs, Sandra
Toney Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 7:33 AM
Sandra, this is such a delightful poem. I love the Cinderella story of a flower in the crannied wall overcoming all odds to glow “a vibrant red among the dread of tangled sprays and dried-out brush.” And then there’s a prince at the end! “Congratulations on your first-place finish on Mile 7 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 8 has already started!
Haight Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 4:50 PM
Thank you again, Mark, for my wonderful placement in your Mile 7 contest. I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem. Sandra
Brown Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 9:17 PM
Very nice.
Lindley Avatar
March 19, 2020 at 6:45 PM
My friend, I am so very pleased to have now found and so enjoyed reading this most wonderful piece! All of it great but for me the stand out is the second stanza. A fav, a true gem.. God bless..
Webster Avatar
March 14, 2020 at 6:47 PM
Congrats, Sandra!
Watt Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 4:53 PM
I love the arc from flower to Cinderella in this charming poem. Always enjoy your rhyme and flow. Congrats on the win! ~ John
Buehler Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 11:55 PM
A very delighting and lovely poem, Sandra. Good luck in the contest.
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