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Flower Girls

mid-day sun caress garden island swoons as one Sundrop tears well up

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/2/2023 3:12:00 PM

Fantastic!

Arlo Parker
Date: 8/2/2023 9:33:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by, :o))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/25/2023 6:07:00 AM

- A lovely haiku, Arlo :) -

Arlo Parker
Date: 4/25/2023 7:36:00 AM

Thanks so much 4 stopping by, SS. ~;o)

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/24/2023 7:57:00 PM

"garden island swoons as one" I shed tears...Kohana: Little flower--Sakura: Cherry Blossom...Hinata: Sunflower, B well, AP

Arlo Parker
Date: 4/24/2023 10:17:00 PM

Garden Isle indeed wonderful...but not my inspiration here. Just a backyard bush loving life in the sun. A Sundrop plant. ~;o)