Flow River,Flow

Shapen a channel, deep with in me- releasing others to fly free See more @ John 7:38

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/24/2009 4:29:00 PM

i love this river of life flowing through each one of us setting us free from our sins--your write bring serenity to the heart and soul---bravo my friend--------charma

P Sheart

Date: 6/24/2009 9:18:00 AM

Oh so beautiful. Very spiritual, love it! Take care Brian. Love Light Truth Patricia

Jim Wilson

Date: 6/24/2009 7:53:00 AM

This flows beautifully; I like the way that starting with L3 the long "e" sound takes off.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/24/2009 7:03:00 AM

Feel the peaceful flow of this poem...ahh...inspirational and comforting. Love Carrie

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/24/2009 3:13:00 AM

smooth intensity for such a controlled form! perfect! Brian, yes, we do influence others, Jim