Flow River,Flow

Shapen
a channel,
deep with in me-
releasing others to
fly free

See more @ John 7:38
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chircop Avatar
June 24, 2009 at 4:29 PM
i love this river of life flowing through each one of us setting us free from our sins--your write bring serenity to the heart and soul---bravo my friend--------charma
Sheart Avatar
June 24, 2009 at 9:18 AM
Oh so beautiful. Very spiritual, love it! Take care Brian. Love Light Truth Patricia
Wilson Avatar
June 24, 2009 at 7:53 AM
This flows beautifully; I like the way that starting with L3 the long "e" sound takes off.
Richards Avatar
June 24, 2009 at 7:03 AM
Feel the peaceful flow of this poem...ahh...inspirational and comforting. Love Carrie
Goff Avatar
June 24, 2009 at 3:13 AM
smooth intensity for such a controlled form! perfect! Brian, yes, we do influence others, Jim
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