Kim Rodrigues Poet Haiku

Flourishing With Rosy Cheeks

FLOURISHING WITH ROSY CHEEKS

bright lights burn
singe my flesh
our hearts aflame

strokes of rays
from north to south
luminary climax

moon-cradled
in my spouse’s arms
splash of serenity

the dawn’s touchdown
taps my feet, flickers
caffeinated candlelight

another day burns
brighter than its ancestor
a relative blush

11/16/2017

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Mick Talbot November 17, 2017 at 6:56 PM How evocative, memories flooding, drowning in caffeinated candlelight To the whole haiku series I can relate! Thank you for sharing! Kim Rodrigues November 18, 2017 at 4:00 PM Thank you Mick!

Constance La France November 17, 2017 at 1:43 PM Kim, nice series of Haiku's, great use of words ! Kim Rodrigues November 17, 2017 at 5:04 PM Thanks so much Constance!

Vijay Pandit November 17, 2017 at 12:38 PM Well written haiku poems--happy, and hopeful...well done with.. "dawn's touchdown"! Kim Rodrigues November 17, 2017 at 5:05 PM Thanks Vijay! Glad you enjoyed!

Tim Smith November 17, 2017 at 11:01 AM wonderful images Kim..."caffeinated candlelight" outstanding Kim Rodrigues November 17, 2017 at 5:05 PM Thanks so much Tim! :)